Oxun Assault-Darkness

Story: After splitting up, Viper takes the 2nd Alpha Attack battalion to drive the Seperatists out of their main base. Meanwhile, Arth and Seargeant Kerr leads 2 members of the 67th Assault battalion to infiltrate one of the CIS' labs.


"No enemies sighted. 564, scan the area again for signs of organic forces." "Yessir!"


Whoosh! "Sir, we have detected signs of enemy forces." says an Air Droid. "Get your squad organized then! Kill all intruders!" "As you wish."


BOOM! "Aah!" "Intruder alert! Intruder alert! Call for backup!" Bam-bam-bam!


Bam-bam-bam! "Kerr, use your grappling hook and attach it to the ground! Then have everyone climb up!" Arth commands. "Got it sir!"


"Be careful trooper!" Bam bam! "Sir! More droids are entering this area!" "Damn! We need to hurry!"


"424, go up first! I'll hold them off!" Kerr commands. Bam-bam!


Bam-bam! Tzz-zzt-zzz! "They're climbing up!" "Roger-roger!"


"I'm almost there..." sighs Kerr. "Sir look out!" screams 354 as a blaster bolt flies inches away from Kerr's helmet.


"AHH!" "Sir!" "Trooper, leave him!" Arth commands. "He did his job, now lets do ours!"


"We need to hurry! I sense tons more droids coming!" "Yessir!" "Now lets move it!"


Bam-bam-pew!

I hope you like it! And Seargeant Kerr does survive however, and he plays a vital part after Order 66.

Niceness! I really liked it! Howed he die? It was like a 2 foot fall!

Once again, great job, great story line.

He got shot in the head twice and fell off head first. I think you'd have died if that happened to you

Good job! Your stories are always fun to read, and your MOC's back them up! I really like this one!

Commander Faie wrote:Good job! Your stories are always fun to read, and your MOC's back them up! I really like this one!

I totally agree, I am a big fan of your work!

Alpha wrote:He got shot in the head twice and fell off head first. I think you'd have died if that happened to you

I would not die from that!....Wait did he get shot from a real gun? If so I would die.Nice MOC too!

legoboyrob2 wrote:I would not die from that!....Wait did he get shot from a real gun? If so I would die.Nice MOC too!

It depends on how "real" you think a blaster is.

astoriabluelegos wrote:

legoboyrob2 wrote:I would not die from that!....Wait did he get shot from a real gun? If so I would die.Nice MOC too!

It depends on how "real" you think a blaster is.

A pastic LEGO gun...... real?

legoboyrob2 wrote:

It depends on how "real" you think a blaster is.

A pastic LEGO gun...... real? [/quote]

Use your imagination to pretend the whole STORY is real, that's what we DO here.

astoriabluelegos wrote:

legoboyrob2 wrote:

It depends on how "real" you think a blaster is.

A pastic LEGO gun...... real?

Use you imagination to pretend the whole STORY is real, that's what we DO here. [/quote]Wow edit that post!!!

legoboyrob2 wrote:

Wow edit that post!!!

What do you mean? I only left out one "r"....

Looks good, but I think it would be better if you'd actually put balloons with their script in there.

Nice, love the scenery. (five)

Jedi say nono word! (Five)

great work on this! The pictures were small enough that the text underneath could easily be read and be related to the picture. That is something other comics have been lacking. great diorama and story! Hope to see more!

By the way, did anyone catch the "He did his job, now lets do ours!" from Ep3?

Alpha wrote:By the way, did anyone catch the "He did his job, now lets do ours!" from Ep3?

Oh, no, I can't belive I MISSED that!