Down but not out

Or should I say up. Anyways, I made a small MOC that had commander fox's speeder bike getting hit by a blaster bolt, and him flying off of it.
Here it is
http://www.brickshelf.com/cgi-bin/gallery.cgi?i=3368891
http://www.brickshelf.com/cgi-bin/gallery.cgi?i=3368903

And more pics in the gallery
http://www.brickshelf.com/cgi-bin/gallery.cgi?f=338037
Oh yea, and you can also see a Moc in that folder of Obi hiding from a republic droid in ep. 3
Please leave comments.

Very good. I like the terrain.

Yeah I like the terrain a lot as well but I don't understand why there are no bodies though.....

The landscaping on this is nice, it really looks uneven, (although the curved 4x4 in the top left corner should go) but the speeder bike is a bit plain. Instead of using a design similar to the first releae LEGO versions back in '99, try using a tricycle body, assuming you have one, and build a speederbike around that frame, like the one in the 7676 RGS.

Also, if the speederbike - a small lightweight vehicle that disintegrates entirely when it hits a tree - is hit by a blaster bolt, there's gonna be explosions, smoke, bits flying of the speeder, and so on. So add these. Take the speeder apart somewhat, and leave a trail of wreckage of smoke and flame. It'll really enhance this MOC and do justice to the landscaping.

Yeah I like the terrain a lot as well but I don't understand why there are no bodies though.....

Well, thier is a clone head and some droid bodies.

J4ke wrote:The landscaping on this is nice, it really looks uneven, (although the curved 4x4 in the top left corner should go) but the speeder bike is a bit plain. Instead of using a design similar to the first releae LEGO versions back in '99, try using a tricycle body, assuming you have one, and build a speederbike around that frame, like the one in the 7676 RGS.

Also, if the speederbike - a small lightweight vehicle that disintegrates entirely when it hits a tree - is hit by a blaster bolt, there's gonna be explosions, smoke, bits flying of the speeder, and so on. So add these. Take the speeder apart somewhat, and leave a trail of wreckage of smoke and flame. It'll really enhance this MOC and do justice to the landscaping.

^Noob^

Joking J4KE! Looks like you knowa thing or two about LEGO! Like the diorama DY!

J4ke wrote:The landscaping on this is nice, it really looks uneven, (although the curved 4x4 in the top left corner should go) but the speeder bike is a bit plain. Instead of using a design similar to the first releae LEGO versions back in '99, try using a tricycle body, assuming you have one, and build a speederbike around that frame, like the one in the 7676 RGS.

Also, if the speederbike - a small lightweight vehicle that disintegrates entirely when it hits a tree - is hit by a blaster bolt, there's gonna be explosions, smoke, bits flying of the speeder, and so on. So add these. Take the speeder apart somewhat, and leave a trail of wreckage of smoke and flame. It'll really enhance this MOC and do justice to the landscaping.

Ha, not much else to say Jake covered it perfectly. I would just suggest be careful mixing bley with gray, that's a huge pet-peeve for me. Good work nonetheless

Nice terrain! The speeder could use some work though. And, please resize your pics in the future. Thanks.