Rhen Var Assault-Cold

Story: After landing on Rhen Var, Viper and the team set out to find Arath and kill him. However, it seems they have landed right in the middle of a ferocious snowstorm. Having no choice, the 704th trudges through snow, intent on incapacitating Arath once and for all. Will they succeed? Or will they freeze to death?


Overview


A nearly frozen STAP, flying uncontrollably through the air


Arth and Keya

Enjoy. :D

Very cool!
Doesn't Rhen Var have grey buildings everywhere though? I'm putting some in my Rhen Var moc.

ARC CloneTrooper141 wrote:Very cool!
Doesn't Rhen Var have grey buildings everywhere though? I'm putting some in my Rhen Var moc.

Yea it's grey and i think like bluish lights? Anways, why am i not in the special thanks? i gave you the idea!

ARC CloneTrooper141 wrote:Very cool!
Doesn't Rhen Var have grey buildings everywhere though? I'm putting some in my Rhen Var moc.

Yup, Rhen Var has grey structures which are built to withstand heat so they made fires inside so the citizens could survive.

(I made all that up )

But the part about the grey buildings is true. They do indeed have grey buildings.

JERK! I just finish a Rhen Var comic! IDIOT! (Joking..... or not...) Anyways, great diorama! I think it needs some ruins though...

You've got a decent base here, but there is room for improvement. Firstly, what's the deal with using those giant escape pod parts? That's just cheating.

Seriously, ditch those bits, right NAO! As for the rest, it's good, but I'd lay some tiles to show snowdrifts and maybe heighten it around smoe clone's ankles, so it makes it look like wading. Go wild with your white cheeses too, slope those drifts!

The parts are modfied "power generators" that will serve a purpose in the next part of the series. There will only be 3 in the Rhen Var series. One bridge one, and one temple one.

Mike888 wrote:

ARC CloneTrooper141 wrote:Very cool!
Doesn't Rhen Var have grey buildings everywhere though? I'm putting some in my Rhen Var moc.

Yea it's grey and i think like bluish lights? Anways, why am i not in the special thanks? i gave you the idea!

You gave me the idea for the bridge, I think. I will include you in that one.
EDIT: Oh whoops, sorry for double post! 'oh:

It looks okay, but the snow needs some work.

I love how well you position your characters, it puts a sense of realism into them.

If you made the base higher, it could really look fluffy and snowy. Add more stacks of white bricks to make a snow hill!

Good job, I would hate to be in Jedi robes in the middle of a snowstorm." Luke... Luuuuke," "Ben... Ben!!"

It needs some more buildings, and the terrain should be more even.

The power generators need to be grey so they stand out more.

I think this is great but you should add some lightsaber blades as lasers to make it a little more ationy.

J4ke wrote:You've got a decent base here, but there is room for improvement. Firstly, what's the deal with using those giant escape pod parts? That's just cheating.

Seriously, ditch those bits, right NAO! As for the rest, it's good, but I'd lay some tiles to show snowdrifts and maybe heighten it around smoe clone's ankles, so it makes it look like wading. Go wild with your white cheeses too, slope those drifts!

Out of curiosity, what giant escape pod parts?

CommandoEighty-Oh wrote:

J4ke wrote:You've got a decent base here, but there is room for improvement. Firstly, what's the deal with using those giant escape pod parts? That's just cheating.

Seriously, ditch those bits, right NAO! As for the rest, it's good, but I'd lay some tiles to show snowdrifts and maybe heighten it around smoe clone's ankles, so it makes it look like wading. Go wild with your white cheeses too, slope those drifts!

Out of curiosity, what giant escape pod parts?

The 4x6x2(IIRC) white bits next to the 2x2x2(Again, I think)slopes over to the left of the MOC.

You mean the two ones that kinda look like poorly buried coffins?

I wouldn't have put it quite like that...