The AT-PW ( REDO For Alphas contest)
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The AT-PW ( REDO For Alphas contest)
This is the All Terrain Patrol Walker (AT-PW). This was used during many battles by specially trained pilots. It was used to clear the enemy front line. The walker has a Gatling gun of the left, a grenade launcher and proton missile launcher on the right, and a high power heavy blaster in the front. This walker could move through thick terrain, even thought it had trouble over logs. debre, etc. The walker was used during the battle of Rhen Var and Kashekkyk (SP).
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Commander Mongoose- Guild Member
- Age : 30
Location : Pennsyvania
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Looks like a real fighting machine. Go get the droids. Nice job.
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I hope the republic is able to produce a lot of these. Because they would crash and the pilot would be taken out. 1. How does he see? you could kind of make it like there are some goggles in the cockpit that extend through the roof allowing him to see. 2. The holes on the side make a perfect shot for droid snipers.
Mike- Non-Guild Member
- Location : Eh, Why should I tell you? Stalker...
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Mike888 wrote:I hope the republic is able to produce a lot of these. Because they would crash and the pilot would be taken out. 1. How does he see? you could kind of make it like there are some goggles in the cockpit that extend through the roof allowing him to see. 2. The holes on the side make a perfect shot for droid snipers.
I meant to say those were glass, whoops.
Commander Mongoose- Guild Member
- Age : 30
Location : Pennsyvania
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darth yoda wrote:Glass ain't gunna stop no lazer boy!
Transperisteel will!
Way to blocky for my tastes, a lot of overhang, and a bit flimsy-looking. No offense, just my opinion !
Re: The AT-PW ( REDO For Alphas contest)
Commander Mongoose wrote:
One of the legs is incorrectly mounted!!!
Aside from that amusing shortcoming, you've got a solid there, although I'd personally get rid of some of the more conflicting angles, and also, as others have mentioned, give the poor pilot some protection from the sides. Also, the forelegs are too thin and theose wheelarches look a bit daft on the sides. Have them pointing up or down, but not both ways. All in all, not bad, but it could be better...
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Nice job!Only problem is it's spelled Kashyyyk.
ODST7- Non-Guild Member
- Location : In a galaxy far,far away....
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Hehe, I noticed that, it's 3 y's not 3 k's.ODST7 wrote:Nice job!Only problem is it's spelled Kashyyyk.
Mike- Non-Guild Member
- Location : Eh, Why should I tell you? Stalker...
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Umm...can we have a picture of it standing without the support of it's feet latched on studs? Like on a smooth, flat surface? Then I'll make my desicion.
Most planets in the star wars galaxy aren't covered in small little bumps, so if you have a model, make it so it can move on any basic terrain, not just bumpy terrain. Otherwise call it the BT-AW.
Most planets in the star wars galaxy aren't covered in small little bumps, so if you have a model, make it so it can move on any basic terrain, not just bumpy terrain. Otherwise call it the BT-AW.
Clonecommando007- Kinda like a UFO
- Location : Ohio
nice,i would sugges
nice,i would suggest puting glass(not realy glass but-you know what i mean)on the sides and front,so he can see and have better cover
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noobswatter- Non-Guild Member
- Age : 29
Location : Canada
Re: The AT-PW ( REDO For Alphas contest)
I like the idea; reminds me of some walker I saw recently but I can't remember. My constructive comments:
Add a windshield(anything ), maybe add windows on the sides(were those meant to be windows? If not it's a sniper's sweet spot ) tilt the legs forward so they can stand, and, as CC said, put em' on a flat surface(which will probably need straightening in the legs to do ).
Otherwise it looks neat!
Add a windshield(anything ), maybe add windows on the sides(were those meant to be windows? If not it's a sniper's sweet spot ) tilt the legs forward so they can stand, and, as CC said, put em' on a flat surface(which will probably need straightening in the legs to do ).
Otherwise it looks neat!
80-0- Non-Guild Member
- Age : 30
Location : New York, New YORK!
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From the front it looks great Mongoose. I think those bley curved (at-st) pieces look like they should hold something like missiles. the shot from the side shows the pilot clearly uncovered which totally violates an armored walker of that size! Try to make the transition from the side to the back vents a little smoother and less blocky.
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The overall idea of the walker is great, and I see you've put some time it thinking of any possible solution for the limited bricks. What I'm wondering though: Why on earth only the AT-ST pieces? I really think it looks too wobbly, uneven and poor quality. The fact there are too much open gaps and it has an odd shape with weird things (like on the legs) just makes this Walker a pretty bad one. I'm sure you an turn this in a much better one by using a larger variety of bricks!
DarthPineapple- VIP Former Staff
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Location : The Netherlands
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Cool and I like the front gun, its huge.
thunder-clone- Non-Guild Member
- Location : kalee
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Also, try and push down the bricks a bit more. From the back(which looks great, btw) a plate or two is a bit loose.
80-0- Non-Guild Member
- Age : 30
Location : New York, New YORK!
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