Koron Attack 1 - Outnumbered

Overview of Mt. Fashht, where the CIS is deveoping a new laser turrent.



Droid: Sir, we have not found any lifeforms yet, but if we do we shall bring them back.
Droid Commander: Roger! Roger!


Mike: I'm telling you if we stay here any longer they will find us!
Bacara: Alright, throw a rope over the wall while Creshk, survey the area for any droid vehicles.


Creshk: No vehicles in site at the moment sir.


Creshk accidently slips knocking a pile of rocks almost giving off there location!


Mike: You OK?
Creshk: Just dandy...BG walk over to the side without getting spotted. Mike and Bacara stay up with me.


Bacara: OK Mike, now you and BG take positions behing the SBDs, when you get the signal take em out!


BG and Mike are given the signal to kill the SBD's Pzzt, Pzzt, Crash.
Mike: Nothing but spare parts now....
BG: Less talk more fighting! The seps see us!


Droid: Sir, send in reinforcements, the repuclic has arrived!


Pzzt
Bacara: Aaughhh! Bacara screams in pain as he is shot, loosing his hand.


Not giving much attention to Bacara, Mike takes out his Rocket Launcher and shoots the sep's turrent. Which conveinently, landed on a droid.


Mike: The CIS reinforcements are here!
Creshk: Lay your weapons down, were outnumbered....


Droid: Wev'e captured a group of clones, bring them back to Camp H07
The remaining squad put there hands up to be captured. All hope is lost. Or so it seems...


What's that? Have our furry companions, The Blarg come to help?

Hope you enjoyed!

WTF? What did you do to that Ewok? I hope he doesn't come to me like that!

darth yoda wrote:WTF? What did you do to that Ewok? I hope he doesn't come to me like that!

What Ewok? That's a Blargian!

OK, I better get an ewok, not that fruity blargian!

darth yoda wrote:OK, I better get an ewok, not that fruity blargian!

Who are you calling fruity? Now, back on topic! :spammers:

OK, back on topic. I like all those cool custom clones.... But the base is way to small. It doesn't even fit the droid bp vehicle. Also, the base needs a lot more detailing, and greebs. Hope this helped!

ps- You really must be desperate for those plant pieces!

darth yoda wrote: OK, back on topic. I like all those cool custom clones.... But the base is way to small. It doesn't even fit the droid bp vehicle. Also, the base needs a lot more detailing, and greebs. Hope this helped!

ps- You really must be desperate for those plant pieces!

Exactly! And why I needed the baseplate for #2!

It's okay. I like the bacara!

Aki-kundu wrote:It's okay. I like the bacara!

Want me to PM you a sneaky peaky about this?

Mike888 wrote:

Aki-kundu wrote:It's okay. I like the bacara!

Want me to PM you a sneaky peaky about this?

OK then!

Aki-kundu wrote:

Mike888 wrote:

Aki-kundu wrote:It's okay. I like the bacara!

Want me to PM you a sneaky peaky about this?

OK then!

Do you like the storyline plot I told you?

The pictures are too blurry, I'm a stickler for quality . The rocks could have been a bit more detailed (along with all of the landscaping), and I find it hard to believe that the Seps are developing a epic turret in the middle of no where....

To put it briefly, the MOC is way to small and the turret is a simple turret that came with the turbo tank! The clones are too varied and the droids are nothing special either.

It needs a lot more work in my opinion, but nice try.

Clonecommando007 wrote:To put it briefly, the MOC is way to small and the turret is a simple turret that came with the turbo tank! The clones are too varied and the droids are nothing special either.

It needs a lot more work in my opinion, but nice try.

OK, sorry, the next will diffinatly be better.

Ok I've got some advice for you! The story and conversation between characters was pretty good, and I really liked the Clones and all of their equipment. However some of the pictures were too bright and blurry! Try to focus before snapping a shot, or taking your picture in a well-lit area so you don't have to use flash. Also the base was boring to be plainly honest. It was too colorful and didn't have any vegetation/rocks really. Try to make sure the actual baseplates are 1 color, then throw some decent landscaping ontop.

Adding to what everyone else is saying, I think the mountain is way to small, the noise the clones make would easily alert the droids.

Work on it a little bit more...

The battle droids sure are stupid in this story they can't even see a rock at there feet and a clone was sticking out in battle droid sight still the did not see him next time make them smarter please.

Oh please, take some time to build, make photo's, and add special effects. This is rubbish.

DarthPineapple wrote:Oh please, take some time to build, make photo's, and add special effects. This is rubbish.

Ouch. How true. Really bad. And aren't you in the Guild? I'd expect this from someone new maybe, but seriously.

I'm gonna have to second the two above statements. Seriously, That one rock pice is meant to be a hill? That was just daft. Why didn't the clones just walk around it? The gun was the design from the Clone Turbo Tank, so that wasn't even your own work. You can do better...

Yea I did rush. Don't have that many spare pieces because 80% of my sets are still intact.

Well why did you post it then? Seiously, if you're not even happy with it yourself, what makes you think that others will like it?

80 percent of your sets are intact? Wow. I have maybe 5% or less. You still need to put more effort into your MOC's.

Clonecommando007 wrote:80 percent of your sets are intact? Wow. I have maybe 5% or less. You still need to put more effort into your MOC's.

I've never known wheather to take them apart or leave them. My 2 spidey sets are apart, my star destroyer, and ultimate lightsaber duel. Everything else is together.

Its alright, but that blarg is an ewok.