ES-SB (Enhanced Speed Swoop Bike)
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ES-SB (Enhanced Speed Swoop Bike)
The ES-SB was essential to the 727th, was a good vehicle to maneuver around in the battlefield. It kept the speed of a normal speeder bike, but when it needed to get somewhere fast, it contained an engine on the back capable of making a powerful and fast turbo boost.
My entry for the build-off. Enjoy!
My entry for the build-off. Enjoy!
Last edited by Jedi Joe on Tue Oct 21, 2008 2:31 am; edited 1 time in total
Jedi Joe- Guild Member
- Location : Florida, the state of neverending heat and humidity...
Re: ES-SB (Enhanced Speed Swoop Bike)
I like the use of minifig hands for the handlebars... love the shape too!
Not bad... I think it needs something else though... greebles and some more detail.
Also, it doesn't have the "feet" making it look flat.
This is what I mean by "feet".
And I was wonder... why did use your own decals? What's wrong with the official? Also, where did you get that control sticker?
Not bad... I think it needs something else though... greebles and some more detail.
Also, it doesn't have the "feet" making it look flat.
This is what I mean by "feet".
And I was wonder... why did use your own decals? What's wrong with the official? Also, where did you get that control sticker?
Re: ES-SB (Enhanced Speed Swoop Bike)
I made my own Clone stickers because well... It was fun!
It doesn't need feet because it is controlled by the joysticks. And I got the control sticker from the gunship.
It doesn't need feet because it is controlled by the joysticks. And I got the control sticker from the gunship.
Jedi Joe- Guild Member
- Location : Florida, the state of neverending heat and humidity...
Re: ES-SB (Enhanced Speed Swoop Bike)
Not bad, but it isn't speeder-bikey enough for me. The engine on the back looks overlarge and daft, not to mention overly simplified. Also, the cockpit is too enclosed. Finally, add some detail to the rear...
Re: ES-SB (Enhanced Speed Swoop Bike)
Looks pretty cool, I love the sleekness. Nice work!
DarthPineapple- VIP Former Staff
- Age : 29
Location : The Netherlands
Re: ES-SB (Enhanced Speed Swoop Bike)
cln-cmndo wrote:Not bad, but it is a little oversised.
Oh my gosh, NO WAY!!!
Jedi Joe- Guild Member
- Location : Florida, the state of neverending heat and humidity...
Re: ES-SB (Enhanced Speed Swoop Bike)
Jedi Joe wrote:cln-cmndo wrote:Not bad, but it is a little oversised.
Oh my gosh, NO WAY!!!
I am actually going to agree with this, It is either too long, or too skinny. Also try adding a few more details in. Overall a nice speeder, good job!
Re: ES-SB (Enhanced Speed Swoop Bike)
Looks alot safer then that open cockpit. You take one miss turn and you fly out. The rear end should though have a little more detail.
captincomcodyct-4056- Age : 29
Location : green bay,wis
Re: ES-SB (Enhanced Speed Swoop Bike)
Like darth yoda said, it's a little on the long side. If put to practical use, it would be quite a large target. I suggest making the bars connecting the front shorter, and add a slope piece to the back.
Axel- Non-Guild Member
- Age : 29
Location : Australia
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