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ES-SB (Enhanced Speed Swoop Bike)

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Post by Jedi Joe Mon Oct 20, 2008 7:04 pm

The ES-SB was essential to the 727th, was a good vehicle to maneuver around in the battlefield. It kept the speed of a normal speeder bike, but when it needed to get somewhere fast, it contained an engine on the back capable of making a powerful and fast turbo boost.

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My entry for the build-off. Enjoy!


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Post by Thunder-blade Mon Oct 20, 2008 7:22 pm

I like the use of minifig hands for the handlebars... love the shape too!
Not bad... I think it needs something else though... greebles and some more detail.
Also, it doesn't have the "feet" making it look flat.

This is what I mean by "feet".
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And I was wonder... why did use your own decals? What's wrong with the official? Also, where did you get that control sticker?
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Post by Jedi Joe Mon Oct 20, 2008 7:33 pm

I made my own Clone stickers because well... It was fun! Razz

It doesn't need feet because it is controlled by the joysticks. And I got the control sticker from the gunship.
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Post by J4ke Mon Oct 20, 2008 7:37 pm

Not bad, but it isn't speeder-bikey enough for me. The engine on the back looks overlarge and daft, not to mention overly simplified. Also, the cockpit is too enclosed. Finally, add some detail to the rear...
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Post by DarthPineapple Mon Oct 20, 2008 7:37 pm

Looks pretty cool, I love the sleekness. Nice work! Smile
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Post by cln-cmndo Mon Oct 20, 2008 10:27 pm

Not bad, but it is a little oversised. Roll Eyes
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Post by Jedi Joe Tue Oct 21, 2008 12:10 am

cln-cmndo wrote:Not bad, but it is a little oversised. Roll Eyes

Hola Wow! Oh my gosh, NO WAY!!! Hola Wow!
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Post by Darth Yoda Tue Oct 21, 2008 12:58 am

Jedi Joe wrote:
cln-cmndo wrote:Not bad, but it is a little oversised. Roll Eyes

Hola Wow! Oh my gosh, NO WAY!!! Hola Wow!

I am actually going to agree with this, It is either too long, or too skinny. Also try adding a few more details in. Overall a nice speeder, good job! Smile
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Post by captincomcodyct-4056 Tue Oct 21, 2008 1:18 am

Looks alot safer then that open cockpit. You take one miss turn and you fly out. The rear end should though have a little more detail.
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Post by Axel Tue Oct 21, 2008 8:19 am

Like darth yoda said, it's a little on the long side. If put to practical use, it would be quite a large target. I suggest making the bars connecting the front shorter, and add a slope piece to the back.
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