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The 95th Journal- Entry 4 Retreat

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Post by Thunder-blade Sat Oct 25, 2008 9:04 pm

This is another long one so I'll just give you the highlights!

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Post by Mike Sat Oct 25, 2008 9:25 pm

great, but maybe a bit more speech? And how did the Clone bleed? He is wearing armor! Razz
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Post by Comrade Faie Sat Oct 25, 2008 9:38 pm

Very good, the GIMPing really adds to it!
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Post by Thunder-blade Sat Oct 25, 2008 10:53 pm

Mike888 wrote:great, but maybe a bit more speech? And how did the Clone bleed? He is wearing armor! Razz

He was hit really hard!! Wink

And this was just to show the retreat... more focused on action... I'll add alot more speech in the next one! Smile
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Post by Jedi Joe Sun Oct 26, 2008 2:07 am

I really like! Work on your sabers more though, they just don't look right...
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Post by 80-0 Sun Oct 26, 2008 2:09 am

I'd just suggest putting on Macro for closeups, and maybe taking out all that blood. Wink Remember, they have black jumpsuits on underneath which absorbs most of the blood, and besides: Star Wars blaster damage is mostly searing rather than penetrating. Wink
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Post by DarthPineapple Sun Oct 26, 2008 7:54 am

Pictures are too big, text disappears. Roll Eyes Oh, and you don't blood when you are hit by a laser.
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Post by TK47 Sun Oct 26, 2008 8:49 am

Not bad at all but the blood? Laser piercing armour just doesn't cut it for me.
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Post by Axel Sun Oct 26, 2008 8:52 am

It's always great to see custom clones in action! By the way, are you putting up that lightsaber hilt tutorial anytime soon?
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Post by Thunder-blade Mon Oct 27, 2008 6:56 pm

I might have one soon... I am just so busy lately...

It'll be up next week at the earliest...
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Post by astoriabluelegos Mon Oct 27, 2008 7:14 pm

DarthPineapple wrote: Oh, and you don't blood when you are hit by a laser.

Yeah, lasers and Lightsabers cauderize as they cut/burn, so no blood. Wink Blue Arc
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Post by Thunder-blade Mon Oct 27, 2008 7:20 pm

All right I get the picture!! Razz

Maybe the B1 droid used a slugthrower! Razz

But seriously, I just wanted to try using blood in GIMP...
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Post by 80-0 Mon Oct 27, 2008 8:26 pm

astoriabluelegos wrote:
DarthPineapple wrote: Oh, and you don't blood when you are hit by a laser.

Yeah, lasers and Lightsabers cauderize as they cut/burn, so no blood. Wink Blue Arc

Yes, cauterize was the word I was looking for. Thanks, ABL! Smile
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Post by Thunder-blade Tue Oct 28, 2008 1:50 am

All right! I won't have anymore bleeding clones in the future!! Wink


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Post by Alpha Tue Oct 28, 2008 1:52 am

Yeah, but a rocket will literally blast your head off, or make a big hole in ya. Wink

Anyhow, I like the MOC! GIMP is awesome like usual, and I love the scenery! Smile
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Post by Thunder-blade Tue Oct 28, 2008 8:11 pm

Thanks Alf! (I know you hate that name! Razz )

The next one should be up within a week or two.... Smile
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