Lost patrol and They thought he was dead...

Everyone else has there own thread so...

Heres my entry, The lost patrol.







The story:

Two clones go searching for the lost patrol but soon get lost themselves. They wander through an abondened alleyway searching for there brothers, little do they know the patrol is just on the other side of the wall. Will they find the patrol or will these lost clones be killed by the CIS` latest threat...

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My second entry, They thought he was dead...








With the explosives placed under the CIS base the clones retreat back to Corusant. Meanwhile one lone Sergeant fights for his life to get out before the whole base explodes. Will he get out in time or will he be killed by the SBDs blocking his path?

Floor 2: Clones.
Floor 1: Valve thing.
Ground floor: SBDs
Basement: Sergeant and storage.
Under ground: Explosives.

C&C welcome.

I like the idea for those bars at the SBD part. Both are VERY nice!

DarthPineapple wrote:I like the idea for those bars at the SBD part. Both are VERY nice!

Thanks, I wanted to add more droids but I think this turned out ok.

Commander Tac wrote:

DarthPineapple wrote:I like the idea for those bars at the SBD part. Both are VERY nice!

Thanks, I wanted to add more droids but I think this turned out ok.

Yes, at such a small space 2 is fine.

DarthPineapple wrote:

Commander Tac wrote:

DarthPineapple wrote:I like the idea for those bars at the SBD part. Both are VERY nice!

Thanks, I wanted to add more droids but I think this turned out ok.

Yes, at such a small space 2 is fine.

Yeah, I like the way it turned out, I personally think this one is much better than my grim old one.

As for grimness for an eleven year old from England I'm...

*thinks about Aki*

Not surprised.

CommandoEighty-Oh wrote:As for grimness for an eleven year old from England I'm...

*thinks about Aki*

Not surprised.

I just had to laugh at that,

anyway, should add a mini gunship on top of my second one or will it be two crowded?