541st Chronicles #11: Removal, Ruination, Recruitment

It's a longer one, 14 panes over the normal 9-10. Didn't feel that I could halve it into two different comics .

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Well, this has got to be the first epicose about character only. And I love it. Other may complain it needs action, but that's never a problem for me. It also sets up so much, and goes even further into his past.

Looks great. Get rid of the yellow face though. it looks ugly with the flesh ones.

That's true, but it didn't stand out now that I think of it, and it's to late to change. Just make him a slightly different spiecies!

Nice! I really like the beginning!!

But isn't "clicks" spelled klicks??

Thunder-blade wrote:Nice! I really like the beginning!!

But isn't "clicks" spelled klicks??

Yeah.It is. Klicks is spelled klicks.

I like it! It goes to show you that Grievous isn't the only grumpy CIS General!

Wait why does some of the comics titles say original chronicles and some don't??

Delta 77-Ponce wrote:Wait why does some of the comics titles say original chronicles and some don't??

I forgot to put it.... , I quickly found though that my title couldn't be as long as I would like it though.

Delta please put in 5 words. Other than that I like the comic and can't wait for the next one.

He saluted with his left hand?If it was a salute, great story anyway and you've got a nice setting going there.

'Course he s'luted with 'is left 'and; CIS people 'r leftists; Communists. 't's quite simple when y'get right down t'it.

How's that for his accent?

Very nice work; I'm enjoying them more and more!

Lots of positive diologue! I really liked the first part in particular. The detail was great and the anger of the officer clearly showed by having him knock down his caf. Nice!

I love your series!!! It's so awsome!! WOOHOO

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You're doing great with this Sialboats! Nice one!

Gerrard wrote:You're doing have done great with this Sialboats! Nice one!

This is.. like... three months old, Gerrard...

Bump much ?