727th Mission on Dantooine #1: Being Watched

Turmoil has struck on Metalorn! General Grievous has given his flagship, the Fireflight to the CIS mastermind, Alpha. The Republic almost had Alpha but he ran away to Dantooine. The 727th camped in a rocky area, hoping to find information there...

Hmm....that gunner helmet looks kinda like what I use for 102nd Airborne helmet except for the visor and life support tubes. great job on the comic though!

Hmm...Not bad....But I would I think an scouting outpost/front line post should be a little bigger and a little more cover....

But I like it over all

Looks great! I love what you used for a tent! great WORK!

Not bad! I like the SFX in this one!! The lasers and the color change was nice!!

Though I don't like how he always calls them grunts...

Thunder-blade wrote:
Though I don't like how he always calls them grunts...

they are real people inside, they have feeling of there own...Even though only thing "take commands and follow them".

great comic, but droids don't have souls.

Brandon9 wrote:great comic, but droids don't have souls.

Good point, good point! That's why Commandos hate them. They can't feel pain.

Thunder-blade wrote:Not bad! I like the SFX in this one!! The lasers and the color change was nice!!

Though I don't like how he always calls them grunts...

Well tell that to Tornado himself. That is his preference.

I suggest making a real landscape. yes that includes a baseplate and some decent MOC's. I can't really say this kind of 'base' is Sci-fi.

Nice tent, gunner looks good, and really good comic.

DarthPineapple wrote:I suggest making a real landscape. yes that includes a baseplate and some decent MOC's. I can't really say this kind of 'base' is Sci-fi.

It's supposed to be a small camp. Not a huge outpost.

Jedi Joe wrote:

DarthPineapple wrote:I suggest making a real landscape. yes that includes a baseplate and some decent MOC's. I can't really say this kind of 'base' is Sci-fi.

It's supposed to be a small camp. Not a huge outpost.

But it doesn't really look like a small camp either.

Ever played Starcraft? This is a lot like a scene in it.

I like the idea, but it could of used a bit more.

Yeah I agree it was a bit plain...

I think it would be more realistic if you had a short wall of some sort, and the clones are sleeping behind it...

I don't think there were tents in Star Wars...

Thunder-blade wrote:I don't think there were tents in Star Wars...

Well, it shows up a few times in a Wookieepedia search, and it'd be weird if they never figured out that hanging some material over a simple frame makes a shelter.

EDIT: Dayum, that's gotta be at least the third new page I've started in the last 24 hours...

Hmmm... I stand corrected then...

(I was actually anticipating to be whacked with a tent article on Wookieepedia... )
I think the Indy tent would look better though..

Thunder-blade wrote:Hmmm... I stand corrected then...

(I was actually anticipating to be whacked with a tent article on Wookieepedia... )
I think the Indy tent would look better though..

What if...

*GASP*

I don't have the Indy tent?

Yeah... it's not like we can go to Bircklink and buy whatever pieces/sets we want at anytime... atleast for me...

Well I don't buy of BL either...

I was just suggesting that you use an Indy tent... it's not like you are gonna revise this MOC in the future or anything...

Needs a whole lot more legos, more tinnies, and some better lines. It's a good start, though, and a helluva lot better than my first !

Thunder-blade wrote:I don't think there were tents in Star Wars...

A camp, circa 1 ABY .

Sialboats wrote:Needs a whole lot more legos, more tinnies, and some better lines. It's a good start, though, and a helluva lot better than my first !.

Don't worry, there will be more in the next one. Those were just two scouts.

Hey Joe, that pic that Sial posted is actually a good reference!

Jedi Joe wrote:

Thunder-blade wrote:Not bad! I like the SFX in this one!! The lasers and the color change was nice!!

Though I don't like how he always calls them grunts...

Well tell that to Tornado himself. That is his preference.

His loss. If he meets Sergeant Kal he'll have hell to pay.

But alas! Not all sergeants are like Kal, and the one who raised him no doubt didn't have Kal's ideals in mind.

Well that was the clone commandos...

But yeah... it would be nice to have some more Mando influence in the clones...