Castle Comic, Part One

I have finsihed my first part of my comic! I used different models from the Bulls/ Lion Line and Crown/ Skeleton castle line, and edited those.

Click here and press 'next'.
The gallery has to be moderated but I think it will be done before you guys read it. Comments welcome!

Gallery isn't public yet. You'll need to change that for everyone to see it.

And how do I do that?






I can't...

I don't have Brickshelf. Sorry. Ask CC007. Maybe he'll know. Or just upload them to the CABG Brickshelf account.

I know how to make them public, thats not the problem. The problem is someone else has to do it...

I like this when is part 2 up?

I don't know.. I didn't even take 1 picture of it yet...

Good start. Is it going to be a comic strip or a story line?

I don't really know what you mean, Rook.

It's ok. I think it's more of an action story though.

Sorry let me rephrase the question. Is it going to be joke with a punch line at the end or are you telling a story. I feels like you're telling a story and when I see comic in the title, I think people are telling joke. I guess that's because I was never into comic books as a kid. I had Lego. Anyways, looking forward to part 2.

It's going to be a story, about the battle between both sides. I think I make the pictures for part 2 in the weekend, because I'm going to use fire and trans-red bricks for blood, and that takes a lot of time.

Sounds Cool. Can't wait to see the end or middle or chapter 2 of the story.

It's alright, I guess. There's just something about the flow of it that puts me off. At the moment, your timing's a little slow. For instance, panels 03, 04 and some of 05 could be merged into one. Some smaller nit-picks:

-The bright white background is a bit distracting; maybe you should use a beige or sand-coloured one. Or even a landscape picture.
-Could you resize the pictures? Sometimes they take a long time to load.
-I think using a photo-editor to turn the individual images into a more comic-book-style layout would be nice - better than clicking 'next' after every panel.

Apart from those technicalities, the actual content is enjoyable, although I hope a more complex storyline develops, rather than "i kill u, this thing goes bash, raarrgh, kaboom!'

I don't really have a large thing to use as a background. I'm sorry. And I'm also not that good at resizing, or editing pictures. And if I make them a comic book style they would be too small.