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Post by Sithassassin Tue Dec 09, 2008 10:05 pm

Here is one of my latest creatons http://www.mocpages.com/moc.php/83514

This is my custom Jedi starfight that I made for the Army of the Trinity Tournament. The Army of the Trinity is a really cool group, you get special ranks, we have tourament like this, and we other cool things. The main reason I posted this is because I am kinda disappointed. I made this in about an hour a couple of days ago when Round 1 was posted. I think it is pretty cool but other people don't seem to. Right now I am currently lossing to another really good builder, Shadow Katana. So far I have 107 points out off 120 points after 2 judges, there is still 1 more judge to judge. Is it really not that good according to these rules?:
Grading system:
Jedi Minifig 10/10 points
Jedi Starfighter 20/20 points
10/10 points for color
10/10 points for the Detail
5/5 points for the background story of the Jedi
5/5 points for how each Elite Commander likes it
60 points total!!!

180 points in total from each Elite Commander
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Post by Jeremy012399 Tue Dec 09, 2008 10:10 pm

That is just A ripped up Obi-wan-kenobi jedi star fighter with some stuff added on.
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Post by Rogue Tue Dec 09, 2008 10:16 pm

Did you just take off half of the wings and add two small engines?
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Post by Sithassassin Tue Dec 09, 2008 10:19 pm

Jeez, you guys are being harsh. It is was Anakin's yellow fighter. Please tell me ?/60 You think I should get.
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Post by flare Tue Dec 09, 2008 10:32 pm

Sithassassin wrote:Jeez, you guys are being harsh. It is was Anakin's yellow fighter. Please tell me ?/60 You think I should get.

What they are basicly saying is that there was a set that had a red ECT-2 (am I right on that?). and you basicly renamed it and added a few parts to it. I would change it to green, or white, or even orange! Smile

But that was good that you did took a yellow JSF and change the color, and added a few parts. but now it looks like you just took TLG set and added a few parts Embarassed....
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Post by Jeremy012399 Tue Dec 09, 2008 11:10 pm

Sithassassin wrote:Jeez, you guys are being harsh. It is was Anakin's yellow fighter. Please tell me ?/60 You think I should get.

I think you should get a 30.
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Post by Sithassassin Tue Dec 09, 2008 11:14 pm

Mad Mad

I don't usually get made but now I am. OK Jeremy lets see you make one better, you have till Friday morning 6 am.
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Post by flare Tue Dec 09, 2008 11:18 pm

he gives you a 30 and so would I because look at this picture in this set!

http://www.bricklink.com/catalogItemPic.asp?S=7283-1

see obi-wan in a RED JSF?
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Post by Jeremy012399 Tue Dec 09, 2008 11:49 pm

Sithassassin wrote:Mad Mad

I don't usually get made but now I am. OK Jeremy lets see you make one better, you have till Friday morning 6 am.

Fine I give you a 40 is that better the only reason I am giving that score is because it just is not perfect, and since you turned something yellow to red I am giving you 10 more points.


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Post by Alpha Tue Dec 09, 2008 11:55 pm

Oh pfft. Can't you guys see that this is COMPLETELY DIFFERENT FROM OBI-WANS ETA-2 ACTIS?!? Seriously! Roll Eyes

It looks nice. However, I'd give it SOME flaps. 50/60. In other words, nice job.

And not to minimod, but almost ALL of the posts in this thread are using bad grammar. Havn't the ADMINs warned atleast 2 of you to use better grammar if you don't want to get banned?


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Post by Clonecommando007 Tue Dec 09, 2008 11:56 pm

I think it looks nice, but the wings do look a little odd. Nice idea though, and I like the engines!
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Post by Thunder-blade Tue Dec 09, 2008 11:57 pm

I agree with Alpha, this isn't at all like the Eta-2....

But it does look a little thread-bare... give it some more guns some more wings and whatnot...

48/60
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Post by Alpha Tue Dec 09, 2008 11:58 pm

Yeah, all your bickering took up half a page.

Anyhow, I agree, it could use some weapons to compensate for the lack of wings, like Saesee Tinn's starfighter.
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Post by Thunder-blade Tue Dec 09, 2008 11:59 pm

You mean the Sharp Spiral?

Just stick to our comments and it'll look great!
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Post by legorevolution Wed Dec 10, 2008 12:51 am

We usually don't rate mocs out of any number for whatever reason. I think it's a decent design but as someone else has said it resembles Obi's too much. The flat sides look cool and all, but one thing that has always bothered me is the spot for the R2 unit- where's the rest of his body go?!
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Post by -Aki- Thu Dec 11, 2008 3:16 pm

This is really good! Republic red always looks cool against grey Smile.
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Post by Rook Thu Dec 11, 2008 3:21 pm

Sithassassin wrote:Jeez, you guys are being harsh. It is was Anakin's yellow fighter. Please tell me ?/60 You think I should get.

CC's whole point of the CABG was to have the best of the best of the best all in one forum. So being hard on members should be expected. I think many members don't know that. So... Build or die! Hola Wow! Razz
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Post by Commander Four Thu Dec 11, 2008 11:28 pm

Even though it's just a mod I would have to give you at least a 46/60 sorry but it's just a mod but good try!
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Post by General Atbin Fri Dec 12, 2008 4:40 am

A Republic droid bomber would be a good idea. Blue Arc
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Post by Guest Sat Dec 20, 2008 4:23 pm

Tath is pretty cool.
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Post by 80-0 Sat Dec 20, 2008 4:24 pm

ARC trooper1234 wrote:Tath is pretty cool.

Huh? Wath is pretty cool? Razz

Five words per post and read the Constitution please! Smile
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