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Post by ODST7 Thu Jan 01, 2009 4:26 pm

Since I haven't really made a "MOC" for awhile so I thought i'd make this:
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I would've taken more pics but my camera battery died. The inside is alot bigger then Lego's, More pics coming later.
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Post by Alpha Thu Jan 01, 2009 4:28 pm

It's good, although the side of the interior could be sloped, and the wings are placed too high.

Also, add a bit of a slant to the cockpit, and it'll be great!
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Post by Comrade Faie Thu Jan 01, 2009 4:30 pm

I like the cockpit and the hull, but the wings are a bit jumbled. Fordo Yo!
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Post by 667thLegion Thu Jan 01, 2009 4:41 pm

I think the cockpit is about perfect, but the wings are too thin and the back is a bit boxy. Nice start though! Wink
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Post by Guest Thu Jan 01, 2009 4:48 pm

The only things I don't like are the wings and the color...
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Post by 80-0 Thu Jan 01, 2009 4:51 pm

I'd like to point out the best of it, but for now...

The wings are fat, the torso is a brick, and the cockpit is too bubbly.

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Post by noobswatter Thu Jan 01, 2009 5:56 pm

I love the colours on it! The main "torso" IS a bit too...blocky.
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Post by huntmaster Thu Jan 01, 2009 6:04 pm

I like it though a bit to blocky.
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Post by Sialboats Thu Jan 01, 2009 6:16 pm

The front of it is very blocky. But other than that... not too shabby. I assume the legion using this shuttle wears armor with orange decalling Razz ?
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Post by The Jinja Ninja Thu Jan 01, 2009 6:21 pm

Sialboats wrote:I assume the legion using this shuttle wears armor with orange decalling?
Why? It looks red to me. Razz

Anyway, the thing that bugs me about this is that the wings are attached too close to the fin. Move them down and out a bit, and it might look better.
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Post by Sialboats Thu Jan 01, 2009 6:26 pm

The Jinja Ninja wrote:
Sialboats wrote:I assume the legion using this shuttle wears armor with orange decalling?
Why? It looks red to me. Razz

Anyway, the thing that bugs me about this is that the wings are attached too close to the fin. Move them down and out a bit, and it might look better.

Nope, that's orange. The contrast on his camera makes the wing area look a bit more like red-orange. The rest of the shuttle is DEFINATELY orange, though Wink .
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Post by Jedi Joe Thu Jan 01, 2009 6:31 pm

It's a little blocky, but it's a good start! Keep up the good work, OD! Smile
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Post by ODST7 Thu Jan 01, 2009 7:15 pm

Sialboats wrote:
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Sialboats wrote:I assume the legion using this shuttle wears armor with orange decalling?
Why? It looks red to me. Razz

Anyway, the thing that bugs me about this is that the wings are attached too close to the fin. Move them down and out a bit, and it might look better.

Nope, that's orange. The contrast on his camera makes the wing area look a bit more like red-orange. The rest of the shuttle is DEFINATELY orange, though Wink .
*cough*crazy*cough* It's red. I'm going to add the second stripes and move down the wings a bit....
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Post by DarthPineapple Thu Jan 01, 2009 7:39 pm

Pretty cool. Where have you got so much orange from? BL?
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Post by The Jinja Ninja Thu Jan 01, 2009 7:58 pm

DarthPineapple wrote:Pretty cool. Where have you got so much orange from? BL?
ODST7 wrote:*cough*crazy*cough* It's red. I'm going to add the second stripes and move down the wings a bit...
Compare it to the (non-dark) red wedge on the RGS in the background. Razz
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Post by DarthPineapple Thu Jan 01, 2009 8:19 pm

Wow this thing looks'oh: Yea but it looked REALLY light...
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Post by ODST7 Thu Jan 01, 2009 8:24 pm

DarthPineapple wrote:Wow this thing looks'oh: Yea but it looked REALLY light...
I'm going to put a small orange stripe next to the yellow ones, as well as greebles. So i'll add orange and yellow.(I already added yellow)
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Post by Foxfang19 Thu Jan 01, 2009 10:20 pm

Wow!
I think your camera is a bit off...it shows Bright Red as orange! Wink uh... lego just released 1 of these Fordo Yo!
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Post by Bantha Thu Jan 01, 2009 10:27 pm

great job! Maybe a little boxy though.
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Post by ODST7 Thu Jan 01, 2009 10:35 pm

Foxfang19 wrote:Wow!
I think your camera is a bit off...it shows Bright Red as orange! Wink uh... lego just released 1 of these Fordo Yo!
I know, I just can't get one yet. By the way it's because of the yellow lighting.
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Post by Guest Fri Jan 02, 2009 1:34 am

This looks awsome I give you major props on this it looks cool what are it's fetures.

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Post by Darth Yoda Fri Jan 02, 2009 1:42 am

Love the cockpit, but I hate the body... Use more slopes.... they are your friend. Wink
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Post by ODST7 Fri Jan 02, 2009 2:22 am

boost wrote:This looks awsome I give you major props on this it looks cool what are it's features?

It's wings can fold and unfold I added two flick fire missles (Pics coming soon) a removable roof to see large troop compartment and two moving turrets. I have lots of greebles on the upcoming version!
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Post by Thunder-blade Fri Jan 02, 2009 5:03 am

The main body is too blocky IMO...

And doesn't the top "fin" have to be bigger?

It's not bad, but I would consider this a WIP at this moment...
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Post by Alpha Fri Jan 02, 2009 5:04 am

Yeah. Send it to the hospital. Wink
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