Battle of Crystal Planet

Okay, here is a moc I made a couple weeks ago with my new battlepacks....





I'm really proud of the last pic; I took it with the camera facing me!

Tell me what you think!

More pics in gallery: http://www.brickshelf.com/cgi-bin/gallery.cgi?f=368507

Hey nice vig pd. I like how the assassin droid is swinging through the air.

Make it bigger and it will be better. But otherwise, it's pretty good!

Heh, 'Crystal Planet' sounds like the bootleg version of Mygeeto or Christophsis.

The MOC's okay, nothing spectacular. I'd have preferred a more built-up landscape and better greebs on the lampposts, but nobody ever listens to criticism anyway.

Yeah, I made it in like 5 min... didn't really feel like greebling... I just wanted a place to play with my new bps...

Wow! This a great little scene. I think you should make a larger one with a HUGE battle in it. That would be sweet!

Eh, not bad, add some greebles (when you feel like it ) and some more detail!

Yeah... I ripped it apart last week though.... I don't even know why I posted it...its sooo bad.... after all, I built it in five min...

A nice creation. Maybe make a larger version of it, with some more clones.

The Jinja Ninja wrote:Heh, 'Crystal Planet' sounds like the bootleg version of Mygeeto or Christophsis.

The MOC's okay, nothing spectacular. I'd have preferred a more built-up landscape and better greebs on the lampposts, but nobody ever listens to criticism anyway.

Not to call you out on his topic to much, but that's not always true. Some people go back and revise (I do ocasscainally) and some store it away for the next time they build something along the same lines. I for example now know that thin legs on a Mecha, even if meant to be, are never good.

On to the MOC, needs more meat, but what you've got right now is good!

'Crystal Planet', eh?



Anyhow, not bad, but nothing signifigant, considering you put it together in approximately 5 minutes.

But, yeah, just add some more greebles, and maybe a bunch of debris, but you've scrapped it already, so...

The Jinja Ninja wrote:Heh, 'Crystal Planet' sounds like the bootleg version of Mygeeto or Christophsis.

The MOC's okay, nothing spectacular. I'd have preferred a more built-up landscape and better greebs on the lampposts, but nobody ever listens to criticism anyway.

Nobody listens to your criticism!

I thought it was good - but as whoever said above, giving it more meat will make it heaps better

"The Jinja Ninja"Heh, 'Crystal Planet' sounds like the bootleg version of Mygeeto or Christophsis.

HAHA, yeah that's what I thought. No but still a good build.

That shot you were really pround of, wouldn't it be easier just to turn the moc around and stand up....

Nice use of battle packs still great job.

Jens wrote:That shot you were really pround of, wouldn't it be easier just to turn the moc around and stand up....

Yeah. I realized that AFTER I took the shot... But I probably never would have taken it if I turned it...I was trying to get the entire back, not just a close-up.

Seeing this makes me expect more stuff.

So, make some more stuff.

With greebles.

I'll be posting some new topics tomorrow....

Wow, 2 pages on a five minute MOC? That's never happened before...

*remembers Rook's Felucia"

Never mind! [center]

That is really cool job you've done there