Commander Hawk

Commander Hawk:
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3488/3297322785_120855e7e8.jpg?v=0

Still thinking of a background for him.

Comments appreciated!

There I fixed it for you.

I like the color and how smooth he looks good job.

Thanks, it took me a while to get it just perfect.

Nice job!

The color is good, straight lines and it's even!

The one thing you need is detail though, add some stuff on the legs and arms!

Thanks TB, that means a lot coming from you.

No problem.

So add those knee caps and shoulders!

Nice straight lines, almost perfect!

Haha, thanks DP, I will post pictures of the updated legs and arms soon.

Pretty good sharpie job. I think it's pretty good!

Overall, a decent sharpie job. You could add a bit, such as detailing with a pinpoint black sharpie for the kneecaps or whatnot, but you have the overall color scheme, and helmet, done well.

I really like the helmet color. Good job!

I like the Overall color. Some kind of yellowish-Orange. I rarely see custom clone like this. Good job!

Oh, one more thing you might want to add.

Add a pauldron, because he looks funny with a kama if he doesn't have a pauldron!

Ya I know I am waiting untill DP's get here.

Hmmm... Don't use sharpie on the legs... the helmet looks good though...

Ooh, yellow...I like it, it's a nicely done figure, the yellow accents are great. Very simple but effective. Good job!

What is that weird bloch in the torso? I think that's a turn off, but I like the helmet!

i love it. i would like it better if it had a little detail on the arms

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very cool, how long did it take you?

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