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Post by Commander Mongoose Thu Feb 26, 2009 9:15 pm

I was bored, and I want kamas. VOTE FOR MEH PLZ11!!!
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Post by [Jay] Thu Feb 26, 2009 9:16 pm

This is like Hoth, you should change it.
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Post by huntmaster Thu Feb 26, 2009 9:17 pm

maybe you should but is that RAS in the thing?
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Post by Commander Mongoose Thu Feb 26, 2009 9:19 pm

Matchstick wrote:This is like Hoth, you should change it.

Why? I tried to make it like winter...
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Post by pdragon27 Thu Feb 26, 2009 9:22 pm

Honestly, I think its really bad. Needs a lot of work. Its just a couple of figs and a "hill" on a baseplate. Add some towers or something! Make it more "Castle-y"! Add a catapult or a ballista!
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Post by [Jay] Thu Feb 26, 2009 9:23 pm

Commander Mongoose wrote:
Matchstick wrote:This is like Hoth, you should change it.

Why? I tried to make it like winter...

I thought the Dino represented an AT-AT and one of your turrets reminded me of the rebel turrets.
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Post by Gerrard Thu Feb 26, 2009 9:39 pm

It's not the best. The rocks are alright but I think more work could have been done.
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Post by huntmaster Thu Feb 26, 2009 9:41 pm

I thought the Dino represented an AT-AT.[/quote]

So did I is it an aat?
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Post by The Jinja Ninja Thu Feb 26, 2009 9:43 pm

huntmaster wrote:
I thought the Dino represented an AT-AT.
So did I is it an aat?
It's a dinosaur. Live with it. Razz
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Post by huntmaster Thu Feb 26, 2009 9:44 pm

The Jinja Ninja wrote:
huntmaster wrote:
I thought the Dino represented an AT-AT.
So did I is it an aat?
It's a dinosaur. Live with it. Razz

Okay I live with it and believe it's a dino.
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Post by Commander Mongoose Thu Feb 26, 2009 9:54 pm

GUYS. COMMENT ON THE MOC. Not about a dinosaur.
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Post by Zepher Thu Feb 26, 2009 10:06 pm

Not really much to comment on, sadly. There's not a lot going on.

The hills is nice. Other than that, it's basically just snow.
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Post by Commander Mongoose Thu Feb 26, 2009 10:07 pm

Guys, I didn't do this for "ZOMG LOOK AT THAT AWESOME CASTLE!!11!!!" I went for cool storyline and creativity.
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Post by Felix42 Thu Feb 26, 2009 10:14 pm

Commander Mongoose wrote:GUYS. COMMENT ON THE MOC. Not about a dinosaur.
Sure! The MOC is a bit plain. Maybe you can add some trees,rocks,or some other scenery. I do like the rocks near the RAS! The minifigs are cool. The dinosaur was a nice touch. Is that a gun beside the good guys? Oh,and one more thing. Why did you put a dead horse on the ground. Sad great MOC though!

Edit: What is wrong with my "g"?! Mad
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Post by Gerrard Thu Feb 26, 2009 10:21 pm

Commander Mongoose wrote:GUYS. COMMENT ON THE MOC. Not about a dinosaur.

I also think that if you maybe put a better background in then a blue wall and maybe more figures. It would be pretty decent.
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Post by Thunder-blade Fri Feb 27, 2009 1:14 am

You definitely need more towers.

And if I were you, I'd make it a bit smaller, that way there's more detail in less space!
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Post by Commander_Fox Fri Feb 27, 2009 3:04 am

Cool! But, I agree with TB, you should put some more...interesting things in there. I like the crash though, and if your going to include the RAS, you should probably create some sort of landing platform for it. That'll be all. Surprised
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Post by Thunder-blade Fri Feb 27, 2009 5:34 am

I don't think he was trying to include the RAS... Wink
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Post by Darth Yoda Fri Feb 27, 2009 5:37 am

If he was then he would be disqualified.... I would know. Roll Eyes
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Post by DarthPineapple Fri Feb 27, 2009 2:15 pm

Hmm it looks like a white baseplate, but it could become a lot better with some extra rocks, or an outpost Castle or something like it. Wink


And you need kamas huh... TLC ones or custom?
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Post by Thunder-blade Fri Feb 27, 2009 4:37 pm

Kamas and paulrdons for Knights? That wouldn't look right..
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Post by DarthPineapple Fri Feb 27, 2009 4:38 pm

I know, but still... it could. In some way I think it could look great!
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