95th Journal- Nar Shaddaa #3

This is kind of a short one.



















Sorry if this one is kinda jumpy, I did this over the course of 3 days, guess my train of thought was interrupted.

Looks pretty good, if one or two shots are blurry, but I like the story and your characters have definitely improved in quality.

The commandos at the end are BADASS!
I WANT COMMANDOS NAOW!

Pretty neat. Just make it a little longer.

I liked it TB, though all the characters are confusing. What happened to the other ARC's in Xet's squad again? The others that are missing?

and yeah, a few pictures were blurry.

Still: I need you as a GIMP MENTOR!!!!!

shadow trooper wrote:Pretty neat. Just make it a little longer.

Since I've decided to be more mature I won't say that's what she said....

Tb this is excellent except the blurry pics as 80-0 pointed out.

LOL! That's almost just like what the other guy said!

Nice TB> I really like it. Will be looking forward to the next one!

Oh and I also the the Gun shot when they are trying to capture the arc trooper. GIMP I suppose?

Awesome comic, TB! You have a sweet story line. But, why did that soldier bleed, when the ARC kicked him? Did he kick him in the jaw? Because that would explain why the soldier keep bleeding. Awesome GIMPing!!! I love the hologram! And, the blaster bolts! Cannot wait for the next comic!

Zepher wrote:I liked it TB, though all the characters are confusing. What happened to the other ARC's in Xet's squad again? The others that are missing?

and yeah, a few pictures were blurry.

Still: I need you as a GIMP MENTOR!!!!!

So this is what happened Zeph. The other 3 ARCs have been captured by the CIS. And Xets was in the lower city because he was kicked off the airspeeder.

And the pics are blurry because I used my tripod and I had to zoom alot.

2 Hours? I doubt even real battles take that long. And in the Star Wars world... Ships get destroyed in a matter of minutes... Well, I love that badass ARC. How'd you do those Mythosaur skulls net to the "chokes"? Is it a special font? If so, can meesa have a linky?

Bloody, did you somehow predict that I was gonna send Anna to the Infinity to command the overhead space battle?!

Dang sweet, TB. I hope to see a lot more of those commandos. Nice battle with the ARC, too.

Pretty good! The GIMPing is awesome, as always. I ENVY YOUR SHARPIE-ING SKILLZ!

Pdragon wrote:2 Hours? I doubt even real battles take that long. And in the Star Wars world... Ships get destroyed in a matter of minutes... Well, I love that badass ARC. How'd you do those Mythosaur skulls net to the "chokes"? Is it a special font? If so, can meesa have a linky?

What the heck? Mythosaur? All that is is the Mandalorian skull, and it's as easy as pie to change in color or size.

I like it, the GIMP blood is pretty good. I love how you can incorporate a lot of your clones into one battle.

I am also wondering why the militant bled when Xets choked him.

Everything but that is AWESOME!

The commandos are awesome at the end, but we all know my upcoming chromized commandos will school them...

Nice looking scene you have there.

My two credits:

The plot was hard to follow at times, and the GIMP wasn't too great. We go from a blurry picture with a barely discernable hologram, to a dead ARC who comes back to life and pwns a whole squad of milita, to a battleship with six very large vulture droids outside the window, going in a direction different than it is, to a bunch of Republic Commandos in a gunship.

Not your best work .

Yeah, I got pretty lazy on this one...

And I think I was a little overambitious with the many storylines, and I didn't execute it properly...

Ok then, my question is answered.

Sialboats wrote:My two credits:

The plot was hard to follow at times, and the GIMP wasn't too great. We go from a blurry picture with a barely discernable hologram, to a dead ARC who comes back to life and pwns a whole squad of milita, to a battleship with six very large vulture droids outside the window, going in a direction different than it is, to a bunch of Republic Commandos in a gunship.

Not your best work .

I disagree with you completely. The three storylines is what made me love this so much. Changing stories every so often is good. you only had two, and they simply traded out once, but it's got an epic feel to it, which I really like.

Well I'm glad you enjoyed it Zeph!

But I will take all of Sial's ideas to heart, there's always room for improvement!