Venator Rescue

In a small corridor of a venator many troopers have been taken captive by a small sqaud of droids. Luckily for the clones a trooper hiding above them jumps down and starts shooting rapidly at the clankers. Before he knows it he is shot down and collapses to the floor of the corridor, saving the troopers.







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VOTE 76TH FOR THE CORPS BUILD!

I think it need many more details.

You freaking cheater.

Let's take advantage of the overhand and extend it by twofold.

Clonecommando007 wrote:You freaking cheater.

Let's take advantage of the overhand and extend it by twofold.

I don't get what you mean.

He means make the walls taller which is what I think you should do as well.

I think this is alright. . .It needs more details, though.

Commander Faie wrote:He means make the walls taller which is what I think you should do as well.

Do you mean add walls on the second floor, or just make the existing ones taller?

Extend it so the clone helmet doesn't fit over it.

It's very crowded and a lot is left unfinished, for example the top of those wall bricks, and the area behind the jumping clone. Maybe put a chute with a ladder and a grate so it's like the clone just climbed down the ladder and kicked off the grate to jump out.

80-0 wrote:It's very crowded and a lot is left unfinished, for example the top of those wall bricks, and the area behind the jumping clone. Maybe put a chute with a ladder and a grate so it's like the clone just climbed down the ladder and kicked off the grate to jump out.

Yeah, that sounds good. I think I'll change it.

Oh Matchy you're killing us. You're in the Guild! You can do better!

I like it but it is too small. And it needs more greebling. But it looks good!

Match, come on, this are just some standard bricks. Where are the details?

Very nice, I like this. Not too over done. It has some great features, for instance, the 'rock like' grey details are very nice. I like the amount of droids you have included, not too 'overcrowded'.

I tried to re-do it but I left it on a chair and my brother tried to sit down on it. It may take some time to make it again.

Wait. He tried to sit down on it?

I assume the brother/Matchstick relations haven't been up to snuff lately?

He's a bit cross after I did a crap sharpie-job on one of his trooopers.

One of HIS troopers? You mean you aren't the sole proprietor of the Legos in your house?

All I see is a bunch of bricks n' figs slapped on a baseplate...

I think you can do better than that.

The bottom line is add more details!

Updates are up, is it an improvement?

Nice! You added more detail and a roof! I love how the clones swinging down from the corridor above. Yet there's still something about it...I don't know what though....

Looks a lot better there. Not much to say, though.

This one is definately better, some more details make it much more creative and interesting!

This is a lot better Match! I like how the clone is swinging down from the roof. Nice job!