"Defend the wall at all costs"!

I whipped this up today because I was bored and felt like builing something.
Story behind this:
A rogue Sith is attacking a wall in front of a key Republic defense outpost. The Republic sends out the 289th Special Ops. troopers to defend the wall.

Overall MOC:


Side View:


Without Figs:


The figs:


C&C welcome!

Thanks,
-CT44

No offense, but that wall just looks a like a random pile of white bricks...

Nice, this is a lot like Bizzle's MOC. How come you didn't use decals for the troopers?

I am still waiting for my decal paper to arrive in the mail.

@DP Well the top layer is.

This is pretty sweet. I like that Sith, and the landscaping.

It is awsome. Nice wall and clone troopers.

Work on the rocks a bit. They look jumbled, and other than that, this just looks like a pile of jumbled bricks on a baseplate.

Yeah that sith is really attacking, by standing still! At least pose him a bit.

Oh and look at DY's mocs and get some better landscape.

It's just not big enough. Make the whole thing bigger and with more clones and it would be great! But it is really cool!

A very average moc to be honest. There's nothing eye catching or original about it. The 'wall' is far too jagged and the figures are pretty basic.

For an impulse set, it's okay. For an MOC, it's rotten. The cliffs are simply too jagged. It doesn't quite flow like rocks would; DY has made that an art form !

It's just too jagged; no detail on the ground floor at all; maybe go for some slopes and tiles on the ground.

This is Ct44's thread.

Naw jk, Post about me all you want.

naterboy1 wrote:FAIL! The wall is just a pile of white bricks. EDIT: EPIC FAIL!

I agree with CT. No need to go around screaming FAIL! when your not even in the guild yourself. So stop acting like a noob and post something constructive...

Back on topic! CT, I must admit, this is a bit plain. Work on it a bit, and it'll be great.

Correct me if I am wrong (wich I often am, and I am not trying to offend you) but wasn't Darth Sidious the only Sith during the clone wars? I read at wookiepedia (and heard from the movies) that there are only two Siths at a time, and before the clone wars the jedi thought that the Sith were extinct, but maybe your Sith was in hiding untill the clone wars (wich would be a very good back story), or perhaps you are saying that he is a Sith when you mean he is a dark jedi, because there is a difference. I think I read about "the rule of two" in a Cad Bane article at wookiepedia saying that there shold be only two Siths at a time, and a lego movie I saw:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=C9AmGKJxLb4&feature=channel_page
There is also annother possibility: that I am wrong.

USE A SPELL CHECKER!!!

It looks okay exepct the house looks is distracting. Didn't mean to insult you if I did.

Then look it up.

I'm not trying to insult you CT44, but what kind of snow goes like this?

Seriously you took your time to make MOCs good enough to get into the guild and then up post this! Why?!

Sorry everybody, this was just like a 10 minute MOC, trust me I can do a lot better if I took some time and put a lot more effort into it...

CT44 wrote:Sorry everybody, this was just like a 10 minute MOC, trust me I can do a lot better if I took some time and put a lot more effort into it...

Shouldn't you always do that? Here's a suggestion. Unless you spent more than an hour on it, don't post it!

I just wanted to MOC something and I finnaly had some spare time...Does everybody have to get pissed at me for creating one bad MOC...

Trying modifying it and make it bigger and more detailed. Then update it here.

I'm not even going to re-visit this thread, so let's just everybody stop getting mad at me.

CT44 wrote:I just wanted to MOC something and I finnaly had some spare time...Does everybody have to get pissed at me for creating one bad MOC...

Well, consistent effort is needed. Not just one Moc that gets you into the guild and them a whole bunch of crappy ones...