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Republic upper atmosphere speeder

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Post by wrecks Sun May 10, 2009 11:57 pm

The Republic upper atmosphere speeder is a large speeder, used for reconasince, scouting or hit and run missions. It has a pilot (right) and a gunner (left) who controls the two anti-personel guns on the sides, and the retracting heavy laser in the middle. It's very fast and agile, but can still take multiple hits from an enemy. It can make it into the upper atmosphere but not space, because the engines need oxygin.

My vig is pretty thrown together, I took all my pictures and uploaded before I rembered we needed the baseplate. It is the dunes on Tatoine.

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Post by Zepher Mon May 11, 2009 12:02 am

Simple. I like the shape a lot, and I love the coloring and size of the two forward things. I want to see more points of interests, be it greebled OR even more sleek. Either of them would work for it I think.
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Post by Gerrard Mon May 11, 2009 12:04 am

Sorry but I am not a fan of this wrecks.

I think that the wings are too thin and blocky, widen them a bit and add more detail.

Also the cockpits need to be a lot bigger, the back part is way to thin and makes it look weird. Maybe make the back wider and have it come up in the middle.

Keep working on it. Smile


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Post by Alpha Mon May 11, 2009 12:07 am

I actually quite like it, disregard what Gerrard said at the wings, as I see no black. Laughing

It could be sleeker, but it's fine right now.
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Post by wrecks Mon May 11, 2009 12:14 am

Yeah, Gerrard, I'm a bit confused at what you mean be all of that. And alpha, I think this may be the first Moc of mine you liked? Razz
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Post by Alpha Mon May 11, 2009 12:19 am

Nah, I actually like your CIS AAT remake, and your other RepTransport which I found after digging through your Flickr. Razz
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Post by Superperson Mon May 11, 2009 12:28 am

It looks ok. Needs more color. Wink
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Post by Gerrard Mon May 11, 2009 12:47 am

Sorry, had some bad spelling, fixed.

Also wrecks, sorry if you thought I was a bit harsh.

I think that this is a great start but I think that you should update it. It will definantly be better. Smile
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Post by Taze Mon May 11, 2009 12:50 am

Pretty good! Only, u could make it a little more sleek with some none studded pieces. Otherwise, awesome job man Smile

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Post by Zepher Mon May 11, 2009 12:51 am

This is something that I'd majorly adivse closing up. Holes in wings, especailly if they'll catch the air becuase they're forward, don't really work.

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Post by wrecks Mon May 11, 2009 12:54 am

Nah Gerrard, its fine Wink And a barely have any large smooth peices, I had too take the dark red ones off my RGS. Do you guys like the flip out cannon? Thats my favorite part.
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Post by Code_Green Mon May 11, 2009 10:26 am

Reminds me of the red flying vehicles in cloud city. Pretty cool, but not your best work Smile .
(you can call me "the man who reminds me of someone else" because everything I see reminds me of something completely different. I'm pretty weird that way Razz .)
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Post by DarthPineapple Mon May 11, 2009 4:20 pm

Very nice! I'm not a big fan of the front but it looks pretty cool.
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