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What should I add Weapon wise?

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Post by CT44 Mon May 18, 2009 5:05 am

My Faction's personal air speeder...The Hornet
Overall shot:
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The 'Propeller':
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Front view:
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Without the fig:
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Post by Thunder-blade Mon May 18, 2009 5:13 am

Looks great CT!! Love the engine thingy!
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Post by CT44 Mon May 18, 2009 5:15 am

Thanks, man! That is also one of my favorite parts about this. Smile
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Post by Alpha Mon May 18, 2009 5:33 am

Air... speeder...?

That doesn't resemble an airspeeder at all. It resembles a flying platform with a huge engine, however. Firstly, give it some slopes on the side. Then, add curves, but don't call a couple taps the sides of an airspeeder... Razz
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Post by wrecks Mon May 18, 2009 5:45 am

Looks cool, Reminds me of a airboat. The only thing I think could be better is to lower the floor a bit, or put a 1x8 under the nozzles, the driver looks to exposed.
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Post by Tac Mon May 18, 2009 7:16 am

Nice, I like the engines. (Inspired by PD?)

I like the greebles but personally think the front is meh. Try making it less blocky to get a more streamline effect. Smile
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Post by Luke Mon May 18, 2009 7:24 am

It would be a good base for a air speeder, but right now it needs some work. It needs more protection for the passengers. If they get sniped, they'll fall back into the lightsaber things and get cut up into sushi. Not really something that you want your soldiers to experience and anyway, who likes sushi made from people? Laughing
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Post by Tac Mon May 18, 2009 7:26 am

Luke wrote:It would be a good base for a air speeder, but right now it needs some work. It needs more protection for the passengers. If they get sniped, they'll fall back into the lightsaber things and get cut up into sushi. Not really something that you want your soldiers to experience and anyway, who likes sushi made from people? Laughing

I knew there was something else! I agree maybe more protection on the side, maybe some mounted guns?
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Post by [Jay] Mon May 18, 2009 7:46 am

Nice, but as others have said there is room for improvement. But I do love the engine. Smile
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Post by Code_Green Mon May 18, 2009 7:55 am

You should delete your accidental post, Matchstick.

I love it, but the soldiers are to excposed to enemy fire. The taps are a nice idea for a fence. Smile
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Post by Luke Mon May 18, 2009 8:01 am

Commander Tac wrote:
Luke wrote:It would be a good base for a air speeder, but right now it needs some work. It needs more protection for the passengers. If they get sniped, they'll fall back into the lightsaber things and get cut up into sushi. Not really something that you want your soldiers to experience and anyway, who likes sushi made from people? Laughing

I knew there was something else! I agree maybe more protection on the side, maybe some mounted guns?

Mounted guns would be a good idea because it doesn't really have anything else to protect it.
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Post by CT44 Mon May 18, 2009 1:24 pm

I knew I forgot something! Yes, I do need to add some guns. Razz
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Post by PhiMa Mon May 18, 2009 1:36 pm

The engines great, and the overall concept is good, but it needs a bit buffing up at the front. Also, maybe change those blue technic pins to grey ones.
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Post by CT44 Mon May 18, 2009 1:42 pm

I'm just removing all the blades and pins...I don't think it fits very well.
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Post by Sceptrio1289 Mon May 18, 2009 1:57 pm

The only thing I think should add is/are guns and protection.Other than that I like it! Smile
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Post by CT44 Mon May 18, 2009 2:00 pm

Yeah, I'm working on that right now...

Ooo, just got a good idea for a poll...
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Post by Gerrard Mon May 18, 2009 10:43 pm

Great, this turned out nicely CT! Just add more the the front and try to add more detail. Wink
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Post by pdragon27 Mon May 18, 2009 10:49 pm

Wow, way to steal my idea for the engine.... Razz And for the poll....Razz

Well... the engine could use some work. Get rid of those blue half studs and well, I don't see the point of putting a gigantic engine on an AIRSPEEDER. Its not as if its a starfighter. I mean, with that engine, it'll go so fast, the person will fly off into the engine and die.... Razz
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Post by foxrex101 Mon May 18, 2009 10:58 pm

Wow CT44 that is pretty amazing. I'm not a big fan of the edges so you should add slopes or stuff and also use a chaingun because it's awesome Wink !
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