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The Brink of Death

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Post by Uberlag Sat Mar 29, 2008 7:00 am

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Zepher has wonded his arm and has rested by a wall on the droid cruiser The Gammorean, A heavy-droid encounters him and is about to take a shot, but Ghost is there and takes the shot first.
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Post by DarthPineapple Sat Mar 29, 2008 7:03 am

I like the pose of the figs, but not really the wall. Beef it up al little bit.
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Post by Uberlag Sat Mar 29, 2008 7:04 am

Not much I could do to beef it up more, Ghost has gotta stand on the wall somewhere, and Zepher needs the bottom like that to be in that position, but I'll see what I can do.
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Post by Comrade Faie Sat Mar 29, 2008 12:47 pm

Great use of exo-force arms I've never thought of that. Good job! Fordo Yo!
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Post by 80-0 Sat Mar 29, 2008 2:32 pm

That's a neat vig ya have there! The wall looks OK, but the droid(it's not your fault) looks particularly stupid. I guess that's why he's called a Gamorrean! Laughing Razz He's standing too close to Zepher, IMO. Green
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Post by Comrade Faie Sat Mar 29, 2008 2:48 pm

CommandoEighty-Oh wrote:That's a neat vig ya have there! The wall looks OK, but the droid(it's not your fault) looks particularly stupid. I guess that's why he's called a Gamorrean! Laughing Razz He's standing too close to Zepher, IMO. Green

No I think the ship is "The Gamorrean".
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Post by Zepher Sat Mar 29, 2008 3:06 pm

I kinda like the droid, but the vig itself isn't that great. Sorry.
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Post by 80-0 Sat Mar 29, 2008 3:08 pm

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CommandoEighty-Oh wrote:That's a neat vig ya have there! The wall looks OK, but the droid(it's not your fault) looks particularly stupid. I guess that's why he's called a Gamorrean! Laughing Razz He's standing too close to Zepher, IMO. Green

No I think the ship is "The Gamorrean".

Oh! I just re-read his post with this information on my mind and it turns out you're right! Smile
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Post by Uberlag Sat Mar 29, 2008 3:17 pm

Droid arms + Weapons= blah, So I tried to use exo-force arms, yes I know it wasn't that great.
Oh, if you just say, It wasn't good, or I don't like it, could you at least tell me how to improve? Your not doing anything for me by not saying anything.
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Post by thefishcometh Sat Mar 29, 2008 9:23 pm

Well, if you have the $$, there are new droid arms that hold weapons straight. I know the new MTT has them as does the hailfire droid battle pack. That could help.
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Post by astoriabluelegos Sat Mar 29, 2008 10:51 pm

Looks cool Uberlag, I kind of like the beefed-up Battledroid, nice work! Smile Blue Arc

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Post by Comrade Faie Sun Mar 30, 2008 2:32 pm

At a second look, the walls where there is those not exactly studs (the ones with the holes in the middle) you could put some SNOT(studs not on top) bricks to smoothen it out. Smile Fordo Yo!
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