541st Vendetta #10: Shame

More plot/character progression. The GIMP was MEH on this one, it could have been better, but it will suffice. I think the ending frame is a bit badass though ! Yes, there were a few typos, but you shouldn't notice or care about them if you're not a grammar Nazi like me .

127. Reference, no?

Anyways, the GIMPing was good, as was the door breach into Alexis's house. Nothing bad I can say about this part, it was excellent!

Great sial! Very well built set as usual and great effects. The plot is getting good too.

It's starting to get really intense! I love the sniper rifle, and the house invasion was sweet!

Alpha wrote:127. Reference, no?

Actually... I didn't make a reference to anything, but I'm curious as to what you think I did .

Nice, I think that the GIMP'ing was actually very good! Nice action and the plot is very good, I could understand it so that's a good thing.

Sial, that was pure art. I loved the ending scene. Can't wait for the 541st to fight back at Equinox and da Seppy's!

Oh, a new character! Hope to learn more. BTW, nice security droid.

Absoluetley fantastic.

It's good to see a return of Turaki's sibling, and that security droid is win. One of your best comics yet.

What face did you use for Alexus?

Of the 500 dead, 127 were dead? Huh? I'm don't think you explained this on your first post. Otherwise, good comic. Nice to see a CIS victory. Uncommon, it is. At least from what I've seen.

Awesome-o-saurus wrote:Of the 500 dead, 127 were dead? Huh?

You saw nothing...

I finally figured out what annoys me so greatly about your comics! Your followers. There's nothing you can do that's wrong in thier eyes! And that annoys me so very much.

On that note... AWESOME WORK! I didn't love those final shots, but Turkai's sis is a BA, and I still hold out hope that you'll take the plot twist I thought you'd take at the very first episode of Vendetta, that would make this story so cool and unexpected! Nice work.

Zepher wrote:I finally figured out what annoys me so greatly about your comics! Your followers. There's nothing you can do that's wrong in thier eyes! And that annoys me so very much.

On that note... AWESOME WORK! I didn't love those final shots, but Turkai's sis is a BA, and I still hold out hope that you'll take the plot twist I thought you'd take at the very first episode of Vendetta, that would make this story so cool and unexpected! Nice work.

Yes there is... that's why they saw nothing . Although, I did make some grevious errors that still are sliding.

Really? She came off as a Badass?! Not the intended effect, but, we win some and we lose some . Don't worry, you'll get your plot-twist (just at the end of this season, so I can segway into the next one).

I'm not sure if I ever even told you the plot twist I wanted to see! And yes, his sister is awesome. I'd, however, advise starting to give the EWqunox commanders names and faces. Something that was cool about last comic (I think it was the lst one) was the way that Turkai and Equinox were the same about a lost one. We'd feel more attached to both sides if they both had names, and I think it would work very well!

Zepher wrote:I'm not sure if I ever even told you the plot twist I wanted to see! And yes, his sister is awesome. I'd, however, advise starting to give the EWqunox commanders names and faces. Something that was cool about last comic (I think it was the lst one) was the way that Turkai and Equinox were the same about a lost one. We'd feel more attached to both sides if they both had names, and I think it would work very well!

Well, either way I'm adding one . Next season'll cover it. Equinox is going to be getting more names, faces, and feelings in Day Two of the Ansion Invasion. Killing off one of Rossetta team's members was the lead in to this. I trust you'll like next week's episode very much!

Uh, Zeph...



It was a statement about how Turaki can't escape death, and how he could not offer the dream of "home" to a clone. I thought I made it pretty clear that they weren't Equinox. The soldiers talking about how they had to keep moving or Equinox and Stark forces would kill them, the Equinox commando corpse, and the fact that Turaki - Tarkin Paramilitary Version - looked pretty much the same as did the one in Chronicles .

I just improved some .

The plot thickens...

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Ah. I follow you now. Sorry, that must of slipped by me. That's even more interesting then! I thought that the ones in the last episode were Equinox...

Sialboats wrote:

Awesome-o-saurus wrote:Of the 500 dead, 127 were dead? Huh?

You saw nothing...

There was nothing. A casualty can be someone wounded or killed, it does NOT mean that someone died.

Awesome, sorry but, FAIL.

Commando Shade wrote:

Sialboats wrote:

Awesome-o-saurus wrote:Of the 500 dead, 127 were dead? Huh?

You saw nothing...

There was nothing. A casualty can be someone wounded or killed, it does NOT mean that someone died.

Awesome, sorry but, FAIL.

Fail on my part or on his... because pre-cover-up I failed. After cover-up, he appears to fail .

Excuse me, I asked a question. What face did you use for Alexis, Sial?

I believe it was the Juno Eclipse head from the widely unpopular SW:TFU sets .

Sialboats wrote:I believe it was the Juno Eclipse head from the widely unpopular SW:TFU sets .

Yea, I never had a chance to get that set...

The TLC version of Rogue Shadow looks a lot sleeker than the actual ship, which looks veritably like a lump. 0_o