The Lava Mine

by -Aki- Sat Jun 20, 2009 6:28 pm

The 101st have been deployed, for diplomatic purposes, to request the locals of the planet Harkina to stop several lava mining operations. However, it turns out they are allied with the seps, and the battle begins.

Flickr

I'm rather proud of this! I think it's my best viggenete to date.

by Alpha Sat Jun 20, 2009 6:38 pm

"Nice job! Though you might wanna help suspend the rest of the vignette, as I can see it's slanting down."

As I posted on Flickr, you might wanna have some columns coming down or a bit of support from the wall, as the base is slanting down (Into the lava Razz

).

by -Aki- Sat Jun 20, 2009 6:41 pm

Um, it's all to add to the element of danger! Yes Razz

!

But yeah, I was kind of hasty putting the sections back together after completion.

by Gerrard Sat Jun 20, 2009 10:41 pm

I would add black flat pieces at the end of where the red piece is leading into the place. But I like how it comes out and the lava is pretty well done! I also like the structure.