PCW: A Scout's Trial
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PCW: A Scout's Trial
PCW= POST CLONE WARS
The Clone Wars are over, the Jedi have been slaughtered, and now it's time for every clone to move on with their lives, one specific trooper, has become a Scout Trooper and has been deployed to the green skied world of Aeten II. The Empire needs to secure the planet for its vast resource deposits, The Rebels, also striving for resources have come to try and hold off the Imperials and capture the planet.
The Scout Trooper, (Who will be nameless...for now) Is riding on a LATT (Low Altitude Troop Transport) The transport is taking 3 new recruits to the Empire's HQ.
As the LATT approaches, The trooper notices something...familiar. The makeshift HQ is in the remains of a Republic SPHA-T.
The troops are dropped off, along with some cargo, the Field Commander walks out to meet his new troops.
"I am Field Commander Altumus. Welcome to your worst nightmare, Our spies have received intel that the Rebel's are scouting the nearby area, I want you to go destroy them before they can report back to their stronghold. But first, I need to check on your equipment and comlink devices."
Altumus calls the Scout Trooper over, "Trooper, you are one of the most valuable members of the troops here, it's your job to kill as many rebels without them reporting that you exist, you are to be a ghost, they will fear you, they will never see you, move out, Ghost.
As the trooper leaves, Altumus thinks to himself, "Why would a scout trooper be carrying a Star-Corps pistol? I thought they gave them all standard weaponry.." But he shook off the thought and moved on.
The trooper is hidden behind a rock formation, 3 other stormtroopers are out in the front, the rebel speeder is zooming by, the Rebel's haven't seen the stormtroopers...yet.
The speeder roars over a demolished pile of shrapnel
The Shock Trooper launches a concussion blast at the speeder, it flips onto its side and the gun turret explodes.
A Rebel runs around back to check on the health of the gunner, leaving himself open to a quick and easy headshot.
Another rebel aims at the Shock Trooper. The Scout Trooper shoots him in the head, he dies.
The shock trooper blasts a concussion rocket at a rebel, he flies backwards.
The troopers wait for a few minutes, checking to make sure there aren't any signs of life, the rebel gunner struggles onto the rolled over speeder
A quick and easy headshot instantly kills him.
The troopers return, victorious and busting with pride, they are praised and each placed at the head of a division.
The Clone Wars are over, the Jedi have been slaughtered, and now it's time for every clone to move on with their lives, one specific trooper, has become a Scout Trooper and has been deployed to the green skied world of Aeten II. The Empire needs to secure the planet for its vast resource deposits, The Rebels, also striving for resources have come to try and hold off the Imperials and capture the planet.
The Scout Trooper, (Who will be nameless...for now) Is riding on a LATT (Low Altitude Troop Transport) The transport is taking 3 new recruits to the Empire's HQ.
As the LATT approaches, The trooper notices something...familiar. The makeshift HQ is in the remains of a Republic SPHA-T.
The troops are dropped off, along with some cargo, the Field Commander walks out to meet his new troops.
"I am Field Commander Altumus. Welcome to your worst nightmare, Our spies have received intel that the Rebel's are scouting the nearby area, I want you to go destroy them before they can report back to their stronghold. But first, I need to check on your equipment and comlink devices."
Altumus calls the Scout Trooper over, "Trooper, you are one of the most valuable members of the troops here, it's your job to kill as many rebels without them reporting that you exist, you are to be a ghost, they will fear you, they will never see you, move out, Ghost.
As the trooper leaves, Altumus thinks to himself, "Why would a scout trooper be carrying a Star-Corps pistol? I thought they gave them all standard weaponry.." But he shook off the thought and moved on.
The trooper is hidden behind a rock formation, 3 other stormtroopers are out in the front, the rebel speeder is zooming by, the Rebel's haven't seen the stormtroopers...yet.
The speeder roars over a demolished pile of shrapnel
The Shock Trooper launches a concussion blast at the speeder, it flips onto its side and the gun turret explodes.
A Rebel runs around back to check on the health of the gunner, leaving himself open to a quick and easy headshot.
Another rebel aims at the Shock Trooper. The Scout Trooper shoots him in the head, he dies.
The shock trooper blasts a concussion rocket at a rebel, he flies backwards.
The troopers wait for a few minutes, checking to make sure there aren't any signs of life, the rebel gunner struggles onto the rolled over speeder
A quick and easy headshot instantly kills him.
The troopers return, victorious and busting with pride, they are praised and each placed at the head of a division.
Last edited by Uberlag on Sun Apr 06, 2008 7:31 am; edited 1 time in total
Uberlag- Non-Guild Member
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Re: PCW: A Scout's Trial
I really like the story! But the planet itself.. and the MOCs could be done a little better.
DarthPineapple- VIP Former Staff
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I designed it to be in a very run down and beaten environment, I build everything moderately bad on purpose, it was meant to look like that.
Uberlag- Non-Guild Member
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GREAT storyline I love this MOC great use of all those gray pieces.
Comrade Faie- Guild Member
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WOW cool storyline and MOC, VERY well done Uberlag!
astoriabluelegos- VIP Former Staff
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Thanks guys, theres probably going to more, this is a comic-series, sit tight!
Uberlag- Non-Guild Member
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I like the overall plot and how you did this, but it seems just a little bland; like it's missing something.
Clonecommando007- Kinda like a UFO
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These are Clones, right? Because a couple stormies couldn't do anything to a rebel tank!
But yea, I loved the mocs and the story. Keep up the good work!
But yea, I loved the mocs and the story. Keep up the good work!
Last edited by Jedi Joe on Thu Apr 10, 2008 8:28 pm; edited 1 time in total
Jedi Joe- Guild Member
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Stormies, this is POST-CLONE WARS
And a concussion rocket could do something like that.
And a concussion rocket could do something like that.
Uberlag- Non-Guild Member
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And clones are stormies, so does it matter?
Wookieedude1- Non-Guild Member
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Not all stormies are clones,the empire took volunteers after awhile.
Uberlag- Non-Guild Member
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Yep they also took "volunteers" if you know what I mean.Uberlag wrote:Not all stormies are clones,the empire took volunteers after awhile.
at-57- Non-Guild Member
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I just said they take volunteers, learn to read?at-57 wrote:Yep they also took "volunteers" if you know what I mean.Uberlag wrote:Not all stormies are clones,the empire took volunteers after awhile.
Uberlag- Non-Guild Member
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I think he meant that they weren't really Volunteers, they were forced into service.
Aridar- Guild Member
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I think that he was refering to the fact that they were probaly forced to join and that they didn't really "volunteer".
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Not quite, from what I heard, you could choose to join.
Uberlag- Non-Guild Member
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Hey, could anyone possibly join in the comic if we give you a sig fig?
Last edited by Commander Faie on Thu Apr 10, 2008 1:01 am; edited 1 time in total (Reason for editing : Forgot my comma.)
Comrade Faie- Guild Member
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You want a renegade clone character, civvie, bounty hunter, stormie, just tell me what you want and I will see if it works.
Uberlag- Non-Guild Member
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I have read some of the star wars books and comics if they want you to join you have to or you die. Now with that being said you could join if you wanted.Uberlag wrote:Not quite, from what I heard, you could choose to join.
at-57- Non-Guild Member
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Nice green screen. I'll expect some good shots from that.
maggosh- Non-Guild Member
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Uberlag wrote:Not quite, from what I heard, you could choose to join.
Their were several ways to join the Imperial army, get drafted, get forced, join up freely, get cloned etc... And on top of these there were clones of Fett still in service and being produced, but after the second battle of Kamino, clones from elite human soldiers began to join the ranks.
astoriabluelegos- VIP Former Staff
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What I meant is:
Are these recruits, or are they clones of Jango Fett? Because the recruits were crap.
Are these recruits, or are they clones of Jango Fett? Because the recruits were crap.
Jedi Joe- Guild Member
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Jango clones, cuz they are awesome.
Uberlag- Non-Guild Member
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Jedi Joe wrote:What I meant is:
Are these recruits, or are they clones of Jango Fett? Because the recruits were crap.
Like I said they were both, Jango clones, human recruits, ad other new clones of new elite human Imperial soldiers.
astoriabluelegos- VIP Former Staff
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