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The loose Unit

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Post by 11_seconds_older Wed Sep 09, 2009 8:44 pm

After the ..erm.. demise of my Sand Fox, I thought, ''Well, I might try my hand at another.."

So I present to you, The Loose Unit!


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Post by Bizzle Wed Sep 09, 2009 8:45 pm

Eh it looks ok. Its bit too multi colored for me. The shape is right on though. 6/10 stars.
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Post by Gerrard Wed Sep 09, 2009 8:50 pm

Cut at lrast one color, if it was up to me, i'd get rid of the light gray and put a bit more dark green in there. Otherwise, it's alright.
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Post by Troopa Daisy Wed Sep 09, 2009 10:14 pm

If the color in the area that is currently light grey was changed to dark grey, I think it would look even better. Nice design! Smile
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Post by Clonecommando007 Wed Sep 09, 2009 10:48 pm

This is much better than your sand fox because this seems to be more minifigure scaled, possibly because it has the cockpit that gives it a good shape.
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Post by 11_seconds_older Fri Sep 11, 2009 9:52 am

Clonecommando007 wrote:This is much better than your sand fox because this seems to be more minifigure scaled, possibly because it has the cockpit that gives it a good shape.

Thanks CC007! And to the rest of you, thanks! It's great getting feedback on what to improve, Well, I've made some new changes.

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Post by (insert name here) Fri Sep 11, 2009 7:51 pm

This latest version is obviously your best. I don't like the tan pieces in front, though. Maybe try a different color.
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Post by 11_seconds_older Fri Sep 11, 2009 8:23 pm

(insert name here) wrote:This latest version is obviously your best. I don't like the tan pieces in front, though. Maybe try a different color.

Oh, ok, They where supposed to be lights, or like, fron-bumper pieces or SOMETHING to stand out, I can change it though. Maybe more orange.
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Post by (insert name here) Fri Sep 11, 2009 8:33 pm

11_seconds_older wrote:
(insert name here) wrote:This latest version is obviously your best. I don't like the tan pieces in front, though. Maybe try a different color.

Oh, ok, They where supposed to be lights, or like, fron-bumper pieces or SOMETHING to stand out, I can change it though. Maybe more orange.

After looking at it longer, I'd just take off those tan studs. But that's just me. Do what you want with it.
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Post by 11_seconds_older Fri Sep 11, 2009 11:23 pm

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11_seconds_older wrote:
(insert name here) wrote:This latest version is obviously your best. I don't like the tan pieces in front, though. Maybe try a different color.

Oh, ok, They where supposed to be lights, or like, fron-bumper pieces or SOMETHING to stand out, I can change it though. Maybe more orange.

After looking at it longer, I'd just take off those tan studs. But that's just me. Do what you want with it.

No, I will, But Y'know, Constructive critism is always great!
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Post by Sialboats Sat Sep 12, 2009 12:34 am

Far better without the beige on it. Keep it off Razz ! The height, I think, is fine. It could use a little more detail, a little more bulk, but it's a sound stand-alone MOC from what I can tell.

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