V2 Second Hover-Car

Revised thanks to Tac! I like it a whole lot better now, so thanks buddy! ALSO GIVE NAME SUGGESTIONS IF YOU LIKE!












(The pilot prides himself with the fact that it looks like a face from the sky.)



First one: http://www.flickr.com/photos/24991648@N05/sets/72157622614874096/











Enjoy!

A bit blocky on the sides but I'm loving the colors.

Nice job Zeph. I like the red-white colors and the tail fin. A little too boxy though.

Wow, one of the best moc I've seen from you! Ever.
@Commander Lukas, how is it boxy, it's full of slopes!

Pyro Hawk wrote:Wow, one of the best moc I've seen from you! Ever.
@Commander Lukas, how is it boxy, it's full of slopes!

Yes, but notice if you will, the're boxing slopes.

I think the problem is that it has no real 'shape' to it. Otherwise it's a nice build.

CloneCommandoXion wrote:I think the problem is that it has no real 'shape' to it. Otherwise it's a nice build.

QFT

The front is a bit too boxy and needs a rounded shape to it. Otherwise, pretty good!

It needs to be rounded a bit more, other than that, it's a very nice MOC!

Gerrard wrote:

CloneCommandoXion wrote:I think the problem is that it has no real 'shape' to it. Otherwise it's a nice build.

QFT

The front is a bit too boxy and needs a rounded shape to it. Otherwise, pretty good!

Not to sound noobish, but what does QFT mean?

The shape needs some work, but other than that it is a nice build.

QFT means quoted for truth.

What parts need to e unlockified? Anyone want to download it and circle the parts you think i need to work on, and then post it here again?

It needs to be smoother with nice transactions.

1: Add one of those 'half' slopes here to smoothen it out.

2: Too blocky IMO, maybe change it to a small slope that joins to the end fin.

3: Although it's a NPU, I think some slopes may look better, but I'm not sure...

4: Get rid of this gap, maybe change the 1x1 tile to a neckbracket then put a tile or a gun down there?

Oh, change the huge 1x8 tiles at the front, the back bit should be a slope (Maybe with a 1x1 tile on it) so it links to the white one behind it. The rest of the studs you can do what you want with, maybe put a smaller tile down in front of the slope.

Edit: I'm not a huge fan of the semi dome thing in front of the cockpit, maybe some slopes will look better.

Thanks Tac, I'm reworking it!

Revised thanks to Tac! I like it a whole lot better now, so thanks buddy!












(The pilot prides himself with the fact that it looks like a face from the sky.)

It looks great now! There is still a little space between the front side and the front, but it is still sweet! Luke Skywalker wished he had a hover car as cool as yours.

A lot better Zeph. It's good that your rounded it a bit more, not perfect, but still a good V2.

Mhmm, much better, I actually quite like the dk. blue/dk. red mixing. Only improvement I think, is that the dk. red tiles on the sides 'stand' out'. It makes it look really odd for some reason.

Yes, it does look a lot better. I actually quite like the colour combo of white, blue, and red.

A lot better. It looks smoother and less blocky. I am also starting to like the color combo as well.

like the color combo. I think it looks like a senate vehicle or something that would belong on a capital planet

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