Kashyyyk escape
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Kashyyyk escape
On kashyyyk jedi master Zar Vin is escaping from death. Bounty hunter Rav Fal is attempting to assassinate jedi master Zar Vin. Will master Zar Vin make it to his custom jedi star fighter in time.
The battle.
Two 502nd troops guarding the ship.
Action shot.
Another close up.
Without the figs.
The cast, two 502nd clones, jedi master Zar Vin, bounty hunter Rav Fal, and a small spider droid.
A shot of Zar Vin's custom jedi star fighter (it was on a failed app).
C@C are welcome.
The battle.
Two 502nd troops guarding the ship.
Action shot.
Another close up.
Without the figs.
The cast, two 502nd clones, jedi master Zar Vin, bounty hunter Rav Fal, and a small spider droid.
A shot of Zar Vin's custom jedi star fighter (it was on a failed app).
C@C are welcome.
Knight- VIP Former Staff
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Re: Kashyyyk escape
Troopa Daisy wrote:The background is pretty good, but why is some of the tall grass floating?
My jedi cut it so it went flying as he was running.
Knight- VIP Former Staff
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The starfighter is really good but the rest is sort of disappointing.
Funky Cow- Funkadelic
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Funky Cow wrote:The starfighter is really good but the rest is sort of disappointing.
The whole thing was really just to show the fighter, and I am more of a ship build than a diorama builder. Also what parts would need work?
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501st Commando wrote:Funky Cow wrote:The starfighter is really good but the rest is sort of disappointing.
The whole thing was really just to show the fighter, and I am more of a ship build than a diorama builder. Also what parts would need work?
Well I would make the landing pad more detailed and instead of just having those grass pieces you could add like some trees.
Funky Cow- Funkadelic
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Ship is good, so is the diorama, but some of the logical fails me.
1) Why are the two guards just standing there? Not gonna help the jedi?
2) The Jedi has a light-sabre. You turn around, and stab the guy. This isn't The Clone Wars, y'know
1) Why are the two guards just standing there? Not gonna help the jedi?
2) The Jedi has a light-sabre. You turn around, and stab the guy. This isn't The Clone Wars, y'know
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PhiMa wrote:Ship is good, so is the diorama, but some of the logical fails me.
1) Why are the two guards just standing there? Not gonna help the jedi?
2) The Jedi has a light-sabre. You turn around, and stab the guy. This isn't The Clone Wars, y'know
Both are true, but did Obi wan just stab jango no. It just makes it have some more action IMO. As for the clones that was a mistake. I might just take new pics with a differant set up.
Knight- VIP Former Staff
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The back pack of your bounty hunter is real nice, and I like the ship.
mhankewycz- Non-Guild Member
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A small tree to the left of the landing pad in the middle of the grass would make this so much better.
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Sence you made this for the ship, I say it's pretty good!
Cyrus- Guild Member
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I don't think such white 'n bright landing pads fit in a Kashyyyk vignette. Grey would look a lot better, maybe with some yellow lines.
MilitaMoose- Non-Guild Member
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Pretty good, but I agree what with PhiMa said. Just maybe add some more detail, definitely put a tree in there.
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Thanks everyone for the comments. I will try to make the landing pad more detailed, and add some trees.
Knight- VIP Former Staff
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Also, you might want to improve the starfighter, it's uneven in several places, and should be more smooth or less blocky.
Alpha- Non-Guild Member
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Alpha wrote:Also, you might want to improve the starfighter, it's uneven in several places, and should be more smooth or less blocky.
How is it uneven? It is the same on both sides. I also don't see how it is blocky, all of the slopes make it curve not cube.
Knight- VIP Former Staff
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That ship is epic. The landscape is very plain though, try using plates to make elevation.
Jedi Joe- Guild Member
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I realy like this set. But I agree with Phima. The two guards are kinda stubarn. But it's prety good.
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