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Post by -Aki- Sun Dec 06, 2009 8:32 pm

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One of Alec's own Nexus Corporation tanks, modified for the 101st Legion.


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Post by Alpha Sun Dec 06, 2009 8:33 pm

Sorry Aki, it just looks like a cube with a turret on top.

Perhaps if you straightened it out and extended the front a bit, then it'd start to look like a tank.
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Post by -Aki- Sun Dec 06, 2009 8:35 pm

Okay. So if I sloped it out it'd look better?
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Post by Alpha Sun Dec 06, 2009 8:36 pm

And maybe straighten out the bottom, and add 3x3 'mini domes' for repulsorlifts.
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Post by Knight Sun Dec 06, 2009 8:41 pm

Way to boxy. Add some slopes or greebles, but keep the turrets. They look nice.
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Post by -Aki- Sun Dec 06, 2009 9:01 pm

BUMP! Second version is up.
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Post by Troopa Daisy Sun Dec 06, 2009 9:03 pm

It's okay, but I don't really like the front. Wink
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Post by -Aki- Sun Dec 06, 2009 9:04 pm

Yeah, that's a placeholder. I'll try and make a better front tommorow.
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Post by Knight Sun Dec 06, 2009 9:04 pm

Much better. The slopes make a differance.
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Post by 80-0 Sun Dec 06, 2009 10:22 pm

Though what you did with the sides is good, the sides are just too flat. Instead of using the slopes facing up, use them facing outward and to the side for a more contoured shape. Plus, that dual gun on the side really needs work. Perhaps allow it to not just rotate up/down in a circle, but also independently left/right?
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Post by CloneCommandoXion Mon Dec 07, 2009 12:49 am

It's too boring, an ok build but there are no greebs are anything to capture my eye.
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Post by Gerrard Mon Dec 07, 2009 2:11 am

Yeah, front is a little too plain. Maybe make it longer with more detail. But not bad. Wink
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Post by astoriabluelegos Mon Dec 07, 2009 5:33 am

The Guns are win, and I actually like the shape. The boxy-ness works for this tank. But some more little greebs could always be a good thing. Wink Blue Arc
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Post by -Aki- Mon Dec 07, 2009 7:53 pm

Thanks for the comments.

I tried really to give it that sleek look, so I am trying to keep it greeble free.
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Post by Hunter of Droids Tue Dec 08, 2009 11:10 pm

It just looks like an ODST pod from http://www.saber-scorpion.com/lego/halo_odstpod.php with a turret on top similar to the first comment...
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Post by -Aki- Wed Dec 09, 2009 11:40 am

They look nothing like each other. This is dark grey and white. That is light bley. That has a parachute thing. This doesn't. I've never every seen that before anyhow, and I'm not a Halo fanboy.

Now, are you actually going to be constructive, an stop echoing other people's comments and sound Unnecessarily rude Mad?
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Post by Smiley Stormtrooper Sat Jan 30, 2010 5:23 pm

Seems A Bit Small And It Is Too Boxy

Bump this. -R Razz
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Post by Smiley Stormtrooper Sat Jan 30, 2010 5:24 pm

Hunter of Droids wrote:It just looks like an ODST pod from http://www.saber-scorpion.com/lego/halo_odstpod.php with a turret on top similar to the first comment...


No It Doesn't! Mad

Ah let's see double posting, 3/4 word post, crap capitalization and punctuation. Humm, bye. -R
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Post by Darth Dan Sat Jan 30, 2010 10:57 pm

I dont either... but I like the tank! Smile

Don't add to topics when a noob bumps a dead thread. -R Wink
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