762nd - The Sarmerran Campaign (Part 1)

Just like my Banshees, this turned out to be sh*t as well, but it's done now. Don't expect a second part...

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That was actually okay, MZ. The image editing was actually really nice.

Troopa Daisy wrote:That was actually okay, MZ. The image editing was actually really nice.

I agree. I like the effects with the gunship's landing. Why don't you try to make another one?

I think it was good, and would love to see more of this.

Nice! I agree with the others you should make a sequel .

Very cool comic and the customs are great too! Can't wait to see the second part....

I thought it was great. I like the amount of action going on. I wish I knew how to do this stuff.

Definitely the new Sial.

Great job, it really looks like a comic.

Love it, just love it. The effects are amazing, and the storyline is crazy. Sweet!

Wonderful. So much effects, I wonder how long that took just for one picture.

/ditto everyone else.

I like the comicbook-esque feel you gave it, and I think you should continue.

GREAT JOB!

The lighting really pulled everything together.

It's a bit bright and colorful, I think turning down the saturation would do. Other than that it's awesome!

Brilliant. Just brilliant. Superb editing, nice story. I really enjoyed reading it.

I love this. It's very well presented, has good action, and the clones just look fantastic.

Aki said exactly what I was going to say.

Great job! The only problelm is that it looks a little too bright. It almost seems like a cartoon type of thing, so just tone the colors down, and use lego backdrops.

Alpha Beta wrote:Great job! The only problelm is that it looks a little too bright. It almost seems like a cartoon type of thing, so just tone the colors down, and use lego backdrops.

I think it was meant to be that way. The brightness that lends to the cartoon is what gives it a nice comic book touch. Looks like a hi-gloss comic.

I think it is perfect the way it is, I wouldn't change a thing and I seldomly say that.

Sorry, I like it better with less cartoon like colors. I never said that it wasn't a good comic, I think it is great, I would do it differently though.

The superb quality of your custom clones was icing on the cake for this; I also love that electro-pulse sniper rifle. It makes me think of the Gauss Rifle from Crysis... but I digress.

Plus, the way you gave it a realistic feeling, like the Republic was actually landing on a Naboo-esque planet, was well-done.

Very professional layout and editing! Nice job!

You really should continue this. Very nice looking, great effects, and your customs amaze me.

It looks really good. I like the laser shots and the lightning thingy.
Maybe you could have the slides going horizontal rather then vertical. It makes it easier to read that way.

OOPS! Sorry I didn't realize how old the post before mine was. Sorry about that, I will be more careful next time.
Please don't ban me for this accident.

Great! When are you releasing the part 2? I can't wait!!!

Don't bump old topics. Next time PM the user if you have a question, after you 3 day ban. -Knight