Scouting Scantopious VI...(contest entry)

This is a planet that I invented. Scantopious VI is a world of transparent tube like flowers and fungi. There are many different species of giant flowers on this world. Which makes good sniper spots for the 602nd legion. Currently the 602nd legion are making their way to the heart of the jungle where the CIS has set up a large communications tower. I won't officially enter this until I get some feedback.

I hope you like it!

The flowers look insanely good, I love this whole thing,you might want to make it bigger and more roomy for the clones, maybe have a few droids in it as well. Overall a very good MOC. Do the 602nd have a Jedi Commander? If they do put him/her in it.

The flowers at the bottom look really nice. However, it makes the big flower at the top look somewhat bland. Either add more to the big flower or shrink it a bit.

Troopa Daisy wrote:The flowers at the bottom look really nice. However, it makes the big flower at the top look somewhat bland. Either add more to the big flower or shrink it a bit.

I think it's the small size of the baseplate that gives it that giant bland look. It's definitely good you're cramming a lot of growth in, just possibly make the base bigger. I really like the use of those bionicle (?) spines for the plant back right. The transparent stems can work if you change the cones at the top methinks. It looks when a transparent stem produces a transred flower or whatever Nice entry

The 'bubble turret' flower/fungus looks out of place. Other than that, great job, I like that big flower the most.

I disagree with everyone... this looks....

Awesome:D... I meant with the changes... there is a nice balance here... I think it all goes well.

It looks great, I like how you've made it almost entirely plants! Although the turret looks a bit odd in the presence of all those plants

Nice job! It reminds me a little too much of felucia. And I have to agree with Bl*c, the grey buble turret thing is out of place.

Something bugs me a bit...

I understand that is supposed to be colourful and hectic, but I honestly don't pay attention to any Felucia-esque MOC's just because of that fact.

Maybe I'm just a whiny ***, a bad critic, or stupid but I can't like it. Don't take this as negative criticism its just my look on all MOC's of the type.

Honestly Faie, whats the point of commenting if you have nothing to say but "I don't pay attention to felucie-like mocs"?

Don't feel bad CloneCommandoXion, it looks wonderful and does look a bit like Felucia.

I like it. Maybe you should have a droid sniper, On that big plant.

Tital Wave wrote:I like it. Maybe you should have a droid sniper, On that big plant.

There is a clone sniper already there. Overall it is great! Could be a bit bigger though.

Good job hiding that Xion! I didn't even see him first time around.