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Post by LazerBlade Mon Apr 26, 2010 11:02 pm

My newest MOC! Built it 30 minutes ago. Name is shadow hornet!!

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It has to areas for storage:

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Enjoy and please be sure to comment! Wink


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Post by Alpha Beta Mon Apr 26, 2010 11:06 pm

A-Wing, shadow speeder, shadow cruiser, shadow hornet, and ...... that's all I got. Looks good, but I hope it is just made for normal atmospheric travel, because it really doesn't look like it could make it in space. Wink
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Post by Persian Prince Mon Apr 26, 2010 11:07 pm

Meh. I know I am one to talk, but to me it lacks the length that clasic Y-wings have. It seems much too stubby to be considered a Y-wing.
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Post by LazerBlade Mon Apr 26, 2010 11:09 pm

Alpha Beta wrote:A-Wing, shadow speeder, shadow cruiser, shadow hornet, and ...... that's all I got. Looks good, but I hope it is just made for normal atmospheric travel, because it really doesn't look like it could make it in space. Wink

Shadow hornet it is. Wink I love that name!! Great idea!

It is a mini fighter to defend a ground base. Wink
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Post by LegoBoyRobert Mon Apr 26, 2010 11:50 pm

Nice, looks a lot like an ME 162 "Comet"
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Post by Guest Mon Apr 26, 2010 11:51 pm

It looks kind of "weak" if you know what I mean. It could use some help.
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Post by Justin Pyne Mon Apr 26, 2010 11:56 pm

It reminds me of a decent LEGO set. Very playable. However, to give it more of a "flashy" feel, I suggest you add some greebles or alternate colors here and there. But overall, I like the shape of it. Good job. A toast!
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Post by customhelmetsman Tue Apr 27, 2010 12:01 am

Looks a lot like a jedi fighter to me. Marine
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Post by LazerBlade Tue Apr 27, 2010 12:03 am

The_Customizer wrote:It looks kind of "weak" if you know what I mean. It could use some help.

It is not weak at all. I will make a video of me dropping it on the floor. Razz


O.K., I know someone answered this question before but what are greebles? Laughing


Also, I do think it looks like a jedi star fighter. Should it be lazerblades personal star fighter?

He is the guy on my avatar Wink

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Post by customhelmetsman Tue Apr 27, 2010 12:07 am

LazerBlade wrote:
The_Customizer wrote:It looks kind of "weak" if you know what I mean. It could use some help.

It is not weak at all. I will make a video of me dropping it on the floor. Razz


O.K., I know someone answered this question before but what are greebles? Laughing


Also, I do think it looks like a jedi star fighter. Should it be lazerblades personal star fighter?

He is the guy on my avatar Wink

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Yeah that would be nice to own one of those always glad to help. Marine
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Post by Persian Prince Tue Apr 27, 2010 12:09 am

LazerBlade wrote:
The_Customizer wrote:It looks kind of "weak" if you know what I mean. It could use some help.

It is not weak at all. I will make a video of me dropping it on the floor. Razz


O.K., I know someone answered this question before but what are greebles? Laughing


Also, I do think it looks like a jedi star fighter. Should it be lazerblades personal star fighter?

He is the guy on my avatar Wink

Thanks guys
Greebles are random details that you put on MOC's to give them a sense of roughness.
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Post by LazerBlade Tue Apr 27, 2010 12:17 am

O.K.! Thanks Perpri!! I will see what I can do. Wink
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Post by Persian Prince Tue Apr 27, 2010 12:32 am

Glad I helped! Another tip: Try using robotic hands, classic pistols, binoculars and other dark bley objects as the have the most intricate detail and are very good greebles!
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Post by Guest Tue Apr 27, 2010 1:49 am

Sergeant Macaroni wrote:It reminds me of a decent LEGO set. Very playable. However, to give it more of a "flashy" feel, I suggest you add some greebles or alternate colors here and there. But overall, I like the shape of it. Good job.

Yeah, maybe include some dark or light grey to it. Make it more shadowy-like.
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Post by bl*c Tue Apr 27, 2010 2:27 am

Don't know what you can store up front but it's a nice little feature. Razz

I like it, it has a cool look to it. Maybe add some greebles and color at the bottom of the ship if possible. Wink If not, leave it like it is.
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Post by Guest Tue Apr 27, 2010 2:34 am

Maybe, if you have it, put the black astromech droid head on top, instead of a regular dome. It would look better.
Also, where are the weapons, or guns located? You should add some on.
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Post by Rook Tue Apr 27, 2010 2:45 pm

A little too simple but not bad for you first few new MOCs. Add a pinstripe of dark grey to the wing and maybe angle the wings down 5-20 degrees. Sloped wings will give your MOCs a more bird like feel. Making it seem faster or more predatory like. Wink
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Post by customhelmetsman Tue Apr 27, 2010 8:08 pm

The_Customizer wrote:Maybe, if you have it, put the black astromech droid head on top, instead of a regular dome. It would look better.
Also, where are the weapons, or guns located? You should add some on.
I was thinking the same thing! Marine
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Post by Troopa Daisy Tue Apr 27, 2010 11:38 pm

It looks a bit too simple. Either enlarge it or add more detail to it. Wink
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Post by Alpha Beta Wed Apr 28, 2010 11:03 pm

LazerBlade wrote:
Alpha Beta wrote:A-Wing, shadow speeder, shadow cruiser, shadow hornet, and ...... that's all I got. Looks good, but I hope it is just made for normal atmospheric travel, because it really doesn't look like it could make it in space. Wink

Shadow hornet it is. Wink I love that name!! Great idea!
It is a mini fighter to defend a ground base. Wink

I knew you where going to like that the best.
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Post by customhelmetsman Wed Apr 28, 2010 11:25 pm

Alpha Beta wrote:
LazerBlade wrote:
Alpha Beta wrote:A-Wing, shadow speeder, shadow cruiser, shadow hornet, and ...... that's all I got. Looks good, but I hope it is just made for normal atmospheric travel, because it really doesn't look like it could make it in space. Wink

Shadow hornet it is. Wink I love that name!! Great idea!
It is a mini fighter to defend a ground base. Wink

I knew you where going to like that the best.
Oh my gosh! Alpha Beta can read minds! It is a good name though. Marine
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Post by Alpha Beta Wed Apr 28, 2010 11:28 pm

^ Razz Yes, I can, soon Rook will make an amazing moc. Wink
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Post by Persian Prince Wed Apr 28, 2010 11:29 pm

It had a different name before. Alpha suggested shadow hornet.
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Post by customhelmetsman Wed Apr 28, 2010 11:32 pm

Persian Prince wrote:It had a different name before. Alpha suggested shadow hornet.
I know. It was Shadow Y-wing. Marine
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