UPDATE: Part 3

This is just a short movie I made, when I am working on a bigger one.
Hope you like it.


What do you think?

Not bad, but not great Mazz. When the ship leaves maybe slow it down a bit so we can see it better. Anyway it is a good start. Have you got a link for your dropship?

Thats cool Mazz i'll subscribe to you on youtube (i'm commandersniperfish). I think it was all a bit fast though, like it had been rushed. But what I did like was the rain effect, how do you do it, Particle Illusion?

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It looks really nice. I love all the things you put on it. (flames, rain, explosions, etc.)
Great job. Can't wait to see more!

Part 2



Yes it is short. The next one will be a lot longer.

Mazz

Pretty good. It was a bit short. Did you do the voice or someone else?

It sounds like the clone is explaining to himself what he is going to do the whole time. Reminds me of the series Darthmilo77 made...

Darth Fett wrote:Pretty good. It was a bit short. Did you do the voice or someone else?

Yes I did the voice.

Rabid Squirrel wrote:It sounds like the clone is explaining to himself what he is going to do the whole time. Reminds me of the series Darthmilo77 made...

I am finding it is going to close to Dmilo77's as well. I had this idea, for all most 2 years now, and it was a good time to start it. When I am working on a bigger film.

Try doing some ease in and out when doing movements like the drop ship leaving. It gives a more natural feeling to it.

Nice job all around, of course there are tweaks that could be done BUT you aren't being paid for this or are a pro so its great as is.

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Darth Fett wrote:Pretty good. It was a bit short. Did you do the voice or someone else?

Yes I did the voice.

I am guessing that is not your real voice. I hope not, because that would be strange.Well good job, and can't wait for the next one.

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mazz wrote:

Darth Fett wrote:Pretty good. It was a bit short. Did you do the voice or someone else?

Yes I did the voice.

I am guessing that is not your real voice. I hope not, because that would be strange.Well good job, and can't wait for the next one.

Yes it is... Some what:P . I used audio FXs to make it sound like I am in a helmet, a clone trooper helmet.

Part 3



Yes I rushed it. It was a bad thing to do. But I am working on a much big and way better film, and need some of the parts in the set...

Kind of meh, nothing too special so far. Didn't really get it either.

Needs a storyline, he builds a shelter hears something and then fires randomly.

It is like LOST. You dont know any thing tell the end, and you need to see them all.