Making The Whole World Blind

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Editor's Note: Mostly happy with this episode. Not 100%, there were some things I tried and didn't like, and a lot of things I tried and DID like. I won't tell which is which, since generally if i do so the "critics" just repeat that back to me. So, tell me what YOU thought was good and what YOU thought was bad.

-Zepher

Wow, I really like this plot, keep up with that!

However, what I didn't like was the white words on white bricks/legs/torso. That made it kind of made the words somewhat hard to read once in a while. Very minor of course, but I thought I'd just point that out.

Well done though, I'm really loving your comics!

I like how you gave us a clue that something was going to happen, that 'Run. Run.' thing was what really kept me reading.

The sudden dim when things got suspicious and when the guns were fired was a nice touch. Or was that a coincidence?

Wait, this means that Elliot and Katharine are dead right?

Yup, they kicked the bucket, all 30 of them.

Other then those beams of light..(what were they?) I think everything was perfect.

Nice job. Love the story!

I love the quote.

An eye for an eye makes the whole world blind.

I'll have to remember it.

bl*c wrote:I like how you gave us a clue that something was going to happen, that 'Run. Run.' thing was what really kept me reading.

The sudden dim when things got suspicious and when the guns were fired was a nice touch. Or was that a coincidence?

I've played with colors balance a lot in these six episodes. That is not by chance.

eclipsegrafx wrote:Other then those beams of light..(what were they?) I think everything was perfect.

Nice job. Love the story!

They were just that, beans of light. Concentrated bulbs... it was an effect... yeah, they weren't great

I really loved this one Zepher! Good job!

Love the twist, if I had to guess, the men where either mercenaries or soldiers working for the government to "tie up loose ends", now the main character will either go after Jesus or find the woman who confronted him. Love the comic, the only thing I would change is the guns, they are too basic, use BA!

Half-Life, anyone? Government soldiers come to kill all the scientists at a secret facility? I like where this is going.

Alpha Beta wrote:Love the twist, if I had to guess, the men where either mercenaries or soldiers working for the government to "tie up loose ends", now the main character will either go after Jesus or find the woman who confronted him. Love the comic, the only thing I would change is the guns, they are too basic, use BA!

I don't use BA. I will vary the guns a bit, but since I have so many factions lined up for this comic, I need to try to use different guns for each. I gave this group chunky and heavier guns since I felt it was more serious and kind of solid, I guess. Concrete. No messing around.

Ham701 wrote:Half-Life, anyone? Government soldiers come to kill all the scientists at a secret facility? I like where this is going.

Never played it. Sorry.

Epic storyline, loving the plot!