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Post by LOST Sun Jul 04, 2010 6:00 am

It is an old MOC, that I just found on my hard drive, so I am posting it. Wink

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Post by Rabid Squirrel Sun Jul 04, 2010 6:02 am

Meh, it looks awkward. The idea is good, but there is too much front, and not enough seat/back end.
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Post by LOST Sun Jul 04, 2010 6:03 am

Rabid Squirrel wrote:Meh, it looks awkward. The idea is good, but there is too much front, and not enough seat/back end.

I totally agree, I have no idea what I was thinking a year ago. :scratch:
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Post by Tac Sun Jul 04, 2010 9:45 am

I remember seeing this in a really old app. It's way to messy IMO, it should be smooth and streamline. But like you said, this was a year ago, you've improved loads since then. Smile
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Post by Alpha Beta Sun Jul 04, 2010 1:57 pm

I don't like the use of 2 trans blues, stick to 1. Also it is too messy, use some flat tiles. Wink
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Post by bl*c Sun Jul 04, 2010 3:49 pm

The back is pretty cool, but, as others have said, it's too messy.
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Post by Rook Sun Jul 04, 2010 3:59 pm

Good example of how sometimes too much is too much.

I'd cut these out:

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That would stream line its look and make it look designed. Currently it looks like greebles piled up on top of a speeder bike. Sad
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Post by Troopa Daisy Sun Jul 04, 2010 4:12 pm

Yeah, what Rook circled should be removed, it's kind of bulky and seems to get in the way. The back looks good though. Wink Smile
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Post by Rook Sun Jul 04, 2010 4:19 pm

Yeah the part with the rider is awesome.
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