Guild Build-Off Entry: Senate Assassination

A senator, Cynan Starkos, (yes, I did use a SW name generator, sue me!) is assassinated by two members of the RN (Robot Ninjas). He was said to have very few allies, because some thought he was mentally deranged, and because he had strong views about the war.

Yep, mediocre MOC and terrible backstory, but heck, I go back to school tomorrow, so I've got other things on my mind.




We can go ahead and award 80-0 the win I would say, even though I haven't seen his yet.

Gallery of fun-ness

Very cool. I like the use of the Minifigures Collection Series Ninjas. I have three of those guys.

The_Customizer wrote:Very cool. I like the use of the Minifigures Collection Series Ninjas. I have three of those guys.

Well, it's sort of the MCS Ninja.. it's the torso, sword, and hood, but the face from the MCS Robot.

I alread commented on flickr, so I'm just gonna copy & paste.

'LOL.
Great job, love the top entrance and how they're coming down.
The broken glass and the blood spatter is also neat.'

667thLegion wrote:

The_Customizer wrote:Very cool. I like the use of the Minifigures Collection Series Ninjas. I have three of those guys.

Well, it's sort of the MCS Ninja.. it's the torso, sword, and hood, but the face from the MCS Robot.

That is exactly what I have! Nice job, I thought that is the head you were going to use!

I see a black wall with some figures on it, and thats about it. This isn't something I personally think would come from a guild member.

This pic makes it look pretty terrible.

Maybe you should add more detail to it, like chairs, or something like that.

I like the guy coming down the rope thingy that's pretty cool but the ground needs more stuff.

Don't know what the random clear trans pieces are. Also, I don't like the trans green pieces, too many, and it looks weird. Overall though, good job.

Sorry, but this is very boring technique wise. It needs more detail, the neon green seems awkward -ly placed, and I think you should have done something else than black for the main wall/floor color. Overall, it needs improvement.

Hazard with a Glove wrote:Sorry, but this is very boring technique wise. It needs more detail, the neon green seems awkward -ly placed, and I think you should have done something else than black for the main wall/floor color. Overall, it needs improvement.

Like I said, it is mediocre at best. I was tired, and didn't quite realize that I had to build a MOC for the challenge until this morning. No, it's not guild worthy, it was more of me screwing around. I am also in the middle of some sorting, so I didn't have my normal brick selection available. But on a side note, who would join if I started a Robot Ninja flickr group?

An assassination? That's IT? I agree in general with Hazard's point. Assassinations tend to take place in the target's place of living, not in a vertical chimney made of charcoal.

80-0 wrote:An assassination? That's IT? I agree in general with Hazard's point. Assassinations tend to take place in the target's place of living, not in a vertical chimney made of charcoal.

It's meant to be like a hallway as the senator is going to a debate. Yours is far better, I will admit defeat now.