Prototype speeder
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The front looks good, but I don't like the tire cover pieces sticking out of the side in the back, it makes it look a little awkward.
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Troopa Daisy wrote:The front looks good, but I don't like the tire cover pieces sticking out of the side in the back, it makes it look a little awkward.
Way to be a "downer" (Sort of...)! I think it looks great! I'm amazed you have all the pieces to match everything. Maybe you should throw in some republic red!
Doraff- Non-Guild Member
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Pretty good, but the front being rectangular doesn't really fit. Try to make it more angled toward the front?
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What to the light grey wheels on the side do?
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You could add some red and make it a "Firebird".
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The Jinja Ninja wrote:What to the light grey wheels on the side do?
As Jinja said, a lot of greebles are just too random.
The actual vehicle and its shape are nice though.
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You desperately need a new back drop. Go buy a poster board for the dollar store! Looks really dirty and gross.
PS: MOC looks ok if you turned the half circle pieces on their sides so that open part is in the centre of the MOC this would have been a win.
PS: MOC looks ok if you turned the half circle pieces on their sides so that open part is in the centre of the MOC this would have been a win.
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Looks good, but as Rook said, the backdrop is really dirty.
If you still need a name, try something like "The Box" or something of that type, because it looks really boxy.
If you still need a name, try something like "The Box" or something of that type, because it looks really boxy.
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Rook wrote:You desperately need a new back drop. Go buy a poster board for the dollar store! Looks really dirty and gross.
PS: MOC looks ok if you turned the half circle pieces on their sides so that open part is in the centre of the MOC this would have been a win.
My cat ate it. I'll see if we have any new paper now.
Edit: nope
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"'the_Customizer"]Looks good, but as Rook said, the backdrop is really dirty.
If you still need a name, try something like "The Box" or something of that type, because it looks really boxy
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Older is normal a bit boxy
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Pretty nice. It reminds me of old Ford Mustangs and Chevy Camaros. I would try to turn the half-oval pieces on the side though, and greeble the inside of those. That would even make it look more like a classic muscle car grille.
Jedi Joe- Guild Member
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Pretty nice speeder, though a few greebles on the back side (specifically that gray droid torso/body) seem weird.
Bossk- Non-Guild Member
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Looks really bulky and could use some Republic red or CIS blue too much grey. Other than that I like the look and shape of the front and like Rook said you should turn the half circles. But its alright for a MOC.
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