Y-9 Racing Speeder

I'm not going to bother with a back story here. This was originally suppose to be a E-Wing but it kind of turned into this. Not the best I know but it was my first honest attempt at any type of ship.








Like is said before, this is my first attempt at a ship of any so a lot of constructive criticism and some slack is appreciated.

Pretty good! But I think it could use color.

Hazard with a Glove wrote:Pretty good! But I think it could use color.

I think blue white and grey is a perfectly fine color scheme. Thanks for the response, and I'll look into adding more color.

Darman wrote:

Hazard with a Glove wrote:Pretty good! But I think it could use color.

I think blue white and grey is a perfectly fine color scheme. Thanks for the response, and I'll look into adding more color.

I don't see any blue. Ohh, you mean the engines.

This is no E-Wing, but it's still pretty cool.
Though I'm not sure about that silver exhaust thingy in the back...

bl*c wrote:

Darman wrote:

Hazard with a Glove wrote:Pretty good! But I think it could use color.

I think blue white and grey is a perfectly fine color scheme. Thanks for the response, and I'll look into adding more color.

I don't see any blue. Ohh, you mean the engines.

This is no E-Wing, but it's still pretty cool.
Though I'm not sure about that silver exhaust thingy in the back...

The nose was originally part of a E-Wing but my ideas and lack of patience to lack parts resulted in this. You mean the chrome engine right?

Yeah, it looks out of place IMO, but I don't know if a slope will work either.

The slope in the end of the frontal nose? I partially agree. The slope isn't gradual enough and is just flat a little grove and a jump upwards, doesn't look that well.

I meant I'm not sure if a slope piece would look good instead of that silver engine thing.

But now that you mention I kinda agree, maybe if you get rid of that tile up front it'll flow better.

Oh, I disagree I don't thinking replacing the engine with slopes is such a good idea.

Edit: Now you all have definite prove I have no proficiency in ship building.

The front looks okay, but the back looks weird with piece wings instead of built up ones.

Thanks Troopa, now do you mean it being a single piece that throws the Moc off?

Darman wrote:Thanks Troopa, now do you mean it being a single piece that throws the Moc off?

Yeah, you see how you used that wing piece that is normally used on spaceships for the majority of the wings? I think instead of that it should be brick built.

Troopa Daisy wrote:

Darman wrote:Thanks Troopa, now do you mean it being a single piece that throws the Moc off?

Yeah, you see how you used that wing piece that is normally used on spaceships for the majority of the wings? I think instead of that it should be brick built.

OK, I'll take that in mind.

Hey, great start. It needs some work though. Here is what you could fix.

All I see are red boxes, could you explain what exactly is wrong inside those red boxes? Thanks for the response.

1. Not a smooth connection.


2. The nose looks really bad. One side has a gap.

OK thanks, I can't do much about the gap though.