Bounty Hunter ship

I felt like Bley and because I needed a better BrickArk entry . And I've got more angles for you guys. There is landing gear that works and is sturdy, but I couldn't get a way to photograph the underside.
So without further ado, here is the












C&C appreciated.

To much Dark Bluish Grey. The cockpit could be switched around. And the engines don't look that great, neither do those 3 technic pins on either side of the wings, and the wings could be put at a slight angle .

Other then that, stay away from just one color.

So do you think I should stick to improving my first entry or improve this one wih your advice?

You had a first entry?

Yep, the Delta-9 Aetherstrike in this same forum.

Use your first entry. But it does need some work.

Did you get part of the front cockpit idea from my V-Wing?

Funny you asked. I ,surprisingly, got the idea from Knight's HLC Mk. I. I wanted to build one like it, and when I came to the cockpit, that's how the cockpit turned out. But then it was very delicate, but the cockpit was strong and was still in one piece. So the rest of the body came from there. But I see the similarity in the windshield and shape now. It may have been in the back of my head while building it...

I advise you incorporate another color that isn't used in a MOC much. Possible Light Blue, Orange, Purple, or Lime Green.

Its flatness disturbs me. And it looks bulky because of its flatness. Sorry, not feeling it in this one, Rijul.

Aw, did Tac die now? Crap...



Nah, it's pretty good. Looks like something Tac would build.

IMO, it's not even very 'Tac-y'.

Tac doesn't really use the sloped and SNOT'd body technique.

And both your entries use that as they primary technique or w/e. IMO, you need soemthing else. And I agree, the over dose of bley is unsettling.

I will be scrapping this and making something else. Thank you for the comments, they really helped. Criticism can be a good thing.

It needs more colour, Sky.

It looks like a lego star wars batmobile!

Hmmmm I wonder what a Lego star wars batman would look like?