The CIS invansion of Polis Massa.

Okay, so here is my first creation to be entered on here!
The invasion of the Mining Planet Polis Massa.

The overall view.

The inside of the building.

The scared and hiding miner.

The whole MOC without minifigures.

A close-up of the Door.


C&C welcome!
Oh, and enjoy!
And when I get a chance, I will upload these to my Flickr page!

I like the idea of the MOC, it has a really good Polis Massa feel to it, and I like the use of SPIII figs as miners. However I don't like the force field, it's too open. Maybe try using bricks?

DarthPineapple wrote:I like the idea of the MOC, it has a really good Polis Massa feel to it, and I like the use of SPIII figs as miners. However I don't like the force field, it's too open. Maybe try using bricks?

Well, I wanted to give that lined short of feel, plus, with bricks, it would be difficult to have a battle droid walking out.
But thanks for the comments!

The shot from inside looking out really sells this MOC for me. Often people will have loose bricks lying around and you can't tell if it was designed or if was just laziness, and not cleaning off the base plate from the table scraps (pieces not used in a MOC but that pushed to the side for better suited pieces). From the inside looking out, you can see the clean crisp details of the interior contrasting the rubble on the exterior. Win.

I like the inside, but the outside just looks meh. Maybe try using slopes to do your rock formations.

P.S. Use a tripod and we might be see your MOCs a little better.

The only things I don't like are the door and outside. I'm going to echo DP and NT and suggest using bricks for the door and slopes for the rock.

Those are my only 2 nitpicks, other than that this is a pretty awesome MOC.

Tac wrote:The only things I don't like are the door and outside. I'm going to echo DP and NT and suggest using bricks for the door and slopes for the rock.

Those are my only 2 nitpicks, other than that this is a pretty awesome MOC.

Thanks! If I can find a whole bunch of Trans-Light Blue bricks, I might try the design!

The_Custom_One wrote:

Tac wrote:The only things I don't like are the door and outside. I'm going to echo DP and NT and suggest using bricks for the door and slopes for the rock.

Those are my only 2 nitpicks, other than that this is a pretty awesome MOC.

Thanks! If I can find a whole bunch of Trans-Light Blue bricks, I might try the design!

Yeah, it might be hard, I don't even have one!

Tac wrote:

The_Custom_One wrote:

Tac wrote:The only things I don't like are the door and outside. I'm going to echo DP and NT and suggest using bricks for the door and slopes for the rock.

Those are my only 2 nitpicks, other than that this is a pretty awesome MOC.

Thanks! If I can find a whole bunch of Trans-Light Blue bricks, I might try the design!

Yeah, it might be hard, I don't even have one!

/Goes and checks BL......


Okay, I found something that might work!

Awesome, I like the idea for the shield.

Seven* wrote:Awesome, I like the idea for the shield.

Thanks! As I said earlier(^^) I might change it soon.

Great job. Love the guy balled up in the corner.

The interior looks good but I'm not really feeling the outside. Maby you could change that black rock to gray. And I think the force field looks good as is, but might look better when you try it with bricks. Overall better than decent. And also Polis Massa is an asteroid, not a planet.

The outside looks MOCpages.

The inside looks Portal.

Custom 333 wrote:The outside looks MOCpages.

The inside looks Portal.

Umm, what do you mean?

The inside looks like something I'd see on the portal, (good) while the outside looks like something from MOCpages. (not good)

The outside could be better IMO. Try using some 1 x 2 dark bley slopes I find those very useful pieces for making rocks and stuff.