On Patrol (Updated with V2.0)

by Bizzle Tue Jan 04, 2011 5:57 pm

On Patrol (Updated with V2.0) 5334161382_b4c90bbd40

A two man group of USMC Marines and their Battle Bot are on patrol in a deserted jungle village. Knowing that the enemy in near they are tasked with checking on the SAM batteries, with out allowing the enemy to know where they are.

Just a quick little MOC I worked on over Christmas break. I wanted to get back into the MOCing grove and this helped. Its simple, nice and rather pleasing to the eye. This MOC took about 2-3 days to make and is one of my favorite ever made. I mostly made this for two reason: 1) To get back into MOCing and 2) To give you guys something to look at while I complete my other MOCs. Enjoy

More pictures in photo set on Flickr.

by Rook Tue Jan 04, 2011 7:43 pm

Ah it's not an official TLG theme! Run away!

I ban you! Razz

by Bizzle Tue Jan 04, 2011 8:05 pm

Rook wrote:Ah it's not an official TLG theme! I ban you!

You are going to make me cry Rook.... Hahaha. Does anything in this MOC look like it could use improvement?

by Rook Tue Jan 04, 2011 9:03 pm

Ah the dirt texture. Maybe add a bit contours to the dirt and add a few 1x1 slopes or tiles to break up the "stud-y-ness" of the dirt.

Edit:

1. Yellow Lines: Currently shows the "naked area".
2. Green Lines: Increase the height of the area to the outside of the green lines by 1 to 2 plates giving you more of a "path".
3. Red Circles: Move 1x1 slopes to edges of contours. This allows them to blend and still add texture.
4. Blue Circles: Toss in a couple 1x1 rounds or some loose stone texture and BAM! Done.
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