Mission 2.3

by Justin Pyne Sat Jan 22, 2011 12:52 am

Entering the Corsair was easy. The 89th had already cleared the way through the tunnels. Nonetheless, it was easy to see all the horror that had occured. There were Ancient Sith Lords with dozens of holes planted in their chests due to blaster bolts. There were troopers scattered everywhere, shiveled up and dead. The very life had been sucked out of them.

Nonetheless, we made it to the Bridge without much opposition. The Sith were busy fighting the SD-6 droids farther down. It wasn't until we were two corridors away when everything turned upside-down. The ship was tearing itself apart. Kon'Me, Republic forces, Droids, and Sith were all fighting onboard one ancient command ship. It had endured a crash landing and a massive assault over two thousand years ago. Nobody knew how long it would last. Still, the Sith knew their way around the vessel quite easily. This put us at a disadvantage. The little demons knew our first move before we made it. They were hellish creatures. Pure black mass shoved into a human form. They had no faces, no nothing. Just pawns from the Dark Side of the force. They hunted in packs of about six or seven; overwhelming our troops.

Worse yet, I traveled in a group of two. Myself and Copper. Tray had been left behind outside the tunnels. He didn't have the heart to make it inside. Poor soldier; he's missing all the action.

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Again, the story may be a bit hard to follow. Razz

Anyway, C&C is greatly appreciated! Surprised

by Rook Sat Jan 22, 2011 1:10 am

The MOC is unusually simplistic and yet the image is still powerful. With a few very nice techniques. Wow this thing looks

by Wickedskillz Sat Jan 22, 2011 2:16 am

This is a very nice MOC. I like the details used on the wall, and it really gives the whole MOC a flowing look. I couldn't really find any flaws, and you have used some effective techniques. Great job!