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Your Daily Dose of Castle- Ye Olde Self-Defense

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Post by Sabarrus Sat Aug 13, 2011 10:27 pm

This is the second in my latest castle creations is a more "Classic-Castle" build involving a old barn and some clumsy villagers.

Ye Olde Self-Defense

A Castle Creation

"The poor rural village of Esbus suffers much from outside thieves and rogues. The village's starving people and low state of mind are helpless against this tyranny. But when three travelers claim they can teach these villagers to defend themselves; Things get hopeful....and a bit hectic!"

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Thanks for having a look! Smile


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Post by Halen Sun Aug 14, 2011 12:17 am

Roof is awesome! As is using boxes as the corner of the building to create some nice texture.
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Post by Bizzle Sun Aug 14, 2011 1:06 am

Wow. I love the little things in this MOC. IE the sacks ect hanging on the bushs and tree. The roof is very nicely done. However I would have added a little more brown to the roof to give it just a little more detail. Over all fantastic MOC.
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Post by Captain Flak Sun Aug 14, 2011 6:52 pm

That is awesome! This is amazing, the texture on the roof of the barn is really great. This was said before, but all of the small are really good as well. This is amazing, great job! Hola Wow!
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Post by C.J.Cutrone9 Sun Aug 14, 2011 7:00 pm



Bizzle wrote:Wow. I love the little things in this MOC. IE the sacks ect hanging on the bushs and tree. The roof is very nicely done. However I would have added a little more brown to the roof to give it just a little more detail. Over all fantastic MOC.
I agree with Bizzle about adding some brown to the roof.
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Post by Sabarrus Tue Aug 16, 2011 4:32 am

Thanks for the feedback guys! A toast!


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Bizzle wrote:Wow. I love the little things in this MOC. IE the sacks ect hanging on the bushs and tree. The roof is very nicely done. However I would have added a little more brown to the roof to give it just a little more detail. Over all fantastic MOC.
I agree with Bizzle about adding some brown to the roof.

Yeah, I see what your saying. I'll keep that in mind next build. Smile

Though instead of adding more brown, the use of dark tan highlights could give a better, distinguished look for hay. Plus, brown is used primarily for the wood and dirt in this one.
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Post by Zepher Wed Aug 17, 2011 5:08 am

As others said, the roof sells this MOC. I love the stable and the tree. The terrain is rather flat, and the color changes in the dirt aren't very sensible to me. I'd advised less rapid changes in color and a little more change of elevation, nothing is ever as flat, naturally, as you have it in this MOC. Everything thing else is perfect!
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Post by Sabarrus Wed Aug 17, 2011 8:13 pm

Zepher wrote:As others said, the roof sells this MOC. I love the stable and the tree. The terrain is rather flat, and the color changes in the dirt aren't very sensible to me. I'd advised less rapid changes in color and a little more change of elevation, nothing is ever as flat, naturally, as you have it in this MOC. Everything thing else is perfect!

Thanks Zeph. I always remember the good points you've been suggesting in my recent builds. A toast!
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