Your Daily Dose of Castle- Ye Olde Self-Defense
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Your Daily Dose of Castle- Ye Olde Self-Defense
This is the second in my latest castle creations is a more "Classic-Castle" build involving a old barn and some clumsy villagers.
Comments are greatly appreciated. Check out My Flickr Photostream for more builds!
Thanks for having a look!
Ye Olde Self-Defense
A Castle Creation
"The poor rural village of Esbus suffers much from outside thieves and rogues. The village's starving people and low state of mind are helpless against this tyranny. But when three travelers claim they can teach these villagers to defend themselves; Things get hopeful....and a bit hectic!"
Ye Olde Self-Defense by Sabarrus, on Flickr
"The poor rural village of Esbus suffers much from outside thieves and rogues. The village's starving people and low state of mind are helpless against this tyranny. But when three travelers claim they can teach these villagers to defend themselves; Things get hopeful....and a bit hectic!"
Ye Olde Self-Defense by Sabarrus, on Flickr
Comments are greatly appreciated. Check out My Flickr Photostream for more builds!
Thanks for having a look!
Last edited by Sabarrus on Sun Aug 14, 2011 1:12 am; edited 1 time in total
Re: Your Daily Dose of Castle- Ye Olde Self-Defense
Roof is awesome! As is using boxes as the corner of the building to create some nice texture.
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Location : Copley, Ohio
Re: Your Daily Dose of Castle- Ye Olde Self-Defense
Wow. I love the little things in this MOC. IE the sacks ect hanging on the bushs and tree. The roof is very nicely done. However I would have added a little more brown to the roof to give it just a little more detail. Over all fantastic MOC.
Bizzle- Guild Member
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Re: Your Daily Dose of Castle- Ye Olde Self-Defense
That is awesome! This is amazing, the texture on the roof of the barn is really great. This was said before, but all of the small are really good as well. This is amazing, great job!
Re: Your Daily Dose of Castle- Ye Olde Self-Defense
I agree with Bizzle about adding some brown to the roof.Bizzle wrote:Wow. I love the little things in this MOC. IE the sacks ect hanging on the bushs and tree. The roof is very nicely done. However I would have added a little more brown to the roof to give it just a little more detail. Over all fantastic MOC.
Re: Your Daily Dose of Castle- Ye Olde Self-Defense
Thanks for the feedback guys!
Yeah, I see what your saying. I'll keep that in mind next build.
Though instead of adding more brown, the use of dark tan highlights could give a better, distinguished look for hay. Plus, brown is used primarily for the wood and dirt in this one.
C.J.Cutrone9 wrote:I agree with Bizzle about adding some brown to the roof.Bizzle wrote:Wow. I love the little things in this MOC. IE the sacks ect hanging on the bushs and tree. The roof is very nicely done. However I would have added a little more brown to the roof to give it just a little more detail. Over all fantastic MOC.
Yeah, I see what your saying. I'll keep that in mind next build.
Though instead of adding more brown, the use of dark tan highlights could give a better, distinguished look for hay. Plus, brown is used primarily for the wood and dirt in this one.
Re: Your Daily Dose of Castle- Ye Olde Self-Defense
As others said, the roof sells this MOC. I love the stable and the tree. The terrain is rather flat, and the color changes in the dirt aren't very sensible to me. I'd advised less rapid changes in color and a little more change of elevation, nothing is ever as flat, naturally, as you have it in this MOC. Everything thing else is perfect!
Re: Your Daily Dose of Castle- Ye Olde Self-Defense
Zepher wrote:As others said, the roof sells this MOC. I love the stable and the tree. The terrain is rather flat, and the color changes in the dirt aren't very sensible to me. I'd advised less rapid changes in color and a little more change of elevation, nothing is ever as flat, naturally, as you have it in this MOC. Everything thing else is perfect!
Thanks Zeph. I always remember the good points you've been suggesting in my recent builds.
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