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Post by AlphaDelta052 Mon Nov 26, 2012 2:11 am

I have been a Lego builder for 10 years. I like posting MOCs. I have always enjoyed building Lego Star Wars Legos. I like this site because I can post many of my Legos as well as look at other peoples creations. My Flickr account is AlphaDelta052. My latest images are a Republic base MOC. I would like if you post some constructive criticism.
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Post by TheMissingPiece Mon Nov 26, 2012 3:20 am

Hey! Welcome to CABG! Well, judging by your MOCs so far, you have a lot to improve on, which is good. That's what this forum is for. I'd suggest working on smaller MOCs to get the right amount of detail because your details are lacking right now. Also, try not to use actual sets in vigs. By the way, bases aren't the best thing to make unless you have a TON of pieces. Remember to use tiles extensively throughout your vigs to give them the smoothness of an actual floor.
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Post by jamesuniverse Mon Nov 26, 2012 5:45 am

Welcome! From what TMP (Above) said it seems he has the point. Don't worry though. I started out pretty bad too, and these friendly members helped me greatly!
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Post by Fithboy Mon Nov 26, 2012 5:56 pm

Hello there! I added you on Flickr. I agree with what other people said: small, tiled, detailed MOCS > big less detailed MOCs.
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Post by AlphaDelta052 Mon Nov 26, 2012 8:28 pm

Thank you all for your input. I will be uploading some more pictures later on.
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Post by AlphaDelta052 Tue Nov 27, 2012 1:37 am

Here's a new MOC:Hello 8221776177_37be9f9129_z
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Post by AlphaDelta052 Tue Nov 27, 2012 1:38 am

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Post by AlphaDelta052 Tue Nov 27, 2012 1:39 am

Hello 8222853814_1054c4d8a5_z
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Post by AlphaDelta052 Tue Nov 27, 2012 1:40 am

Hello 8222855718_9a35288963_z
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Post by DeltaRecon226 Tue Nov 27, 2012 1:45 am

Nice job! The perspective of the last picture is really cool. The suggestions I would make are to add more grass or some sort of rock formation to the ground, and maybe a few greebles and details on the flat walls. Although, the clean look it has is still very nice. Great job!
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Post by jamesuniverse Tue Nov 27, 2012 1:54 am

First don't quintuple post. Second detail those walls like crazy. More plants. Throw a nice roof on this. Ditch the water unless your willing to raise the entire MOC up at least a brick. More layering on the ground and don't worry so much about figures. Also post this in the MOC feedback thread
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Post by AlphaDelta052 Tue Nov 27, 2012 2:07 am

Sorry about the posting thing. I am going to post a more detailed one in the next few days. I might deduct the figures on the outside.
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Post by Rook Tue Nov 27, 2012 3:49 pm

Read rules before posting.
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