Story of Alec 1#

For a start, please tell me how to do special FX and speech.

Let\'s go!

Alec: What a bloody wreck!

Abelo: Oi! Stop there! This is our land! Scram! Alec: You? Where\'s your army?

Abelo: I wouldn\'t call it a army...

Abelo:...But it\'s still more than enough to kill you.

*Alec fires* Abelo: Whoa!

Alec: Bring it on, fierfiek!

*Alec knocks out gun* Gangster: What th-

*Alec grabs him by the neck with his blaster, as sniper fires, hitting the gangster*

*Alec dives for cover*

*Alec jumps on top of the platform* Sniper: Where did he go?

Alec: Boo *Fires blaster*

*Alec jumps down* Alec: Come and face me, coward!

Abelo: No-one calls me a coward, you karking pile of sithspit!

*Alec fires blaster, knocking out Abelo\'s.

Abelo: Eat this, scum pile!

*Alec twists the spear around, hitting Abelo in the face* Abelo: NO! Please don\'t!

Alec: Please do? OK then.

Alec: Thanks for letting me pass. I really appreciate it.

What will happen next? Find out next time!

Here\'s the cast:

Abelo: ABL (A=Astoria, b=blue, e=thrown in for good measure and lo=lego. Clever eh?)
Alec: Me
Gangster: No body
Sniper: Commander Mitten (Just because he is a nice guy, and because he likes snipers)

If you know a free program that can add SFX and speech bubbles, PM me!

Aki, whom is feeling very chuffed

Woah those are messed up links!

Is there something wrong with your img links? Other than that the dialouge sounds cool.

What about using deeplinks?

Been sorted out now! Enjoy!

Ouch, that spear through me hurts! Is there a docter in the house?!

astoriabluelegos wrote:Ouch, that spear through me hurts! Is there a docter in the house?!

No, instead there are droids. They will be sure to "Take care of you" .

If you could take smaller pics and then post image deeplinks you'll get as much reopky's as others do.

That was pretty good. I liked it.

I liked it but next time, can you please use deeplinks?

Dude, this comic sucks. It is getting about 2.3% attention compared to Ubers and Zephs.

Please close this.

Aki-kundu wrote:Dude, this comic sucks. It is getting about 2.3% attention compared to Ubers and Zephs.

Please close this.

Aki - just because your comic isn't getting much attention doesn't mean it sucks. Dude, have a little more confidence in your work.