my dc-15 is fineshed!!!!

link right here

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PLEASE! Use a spell checker! For starters "my dc-15 is fine shed!!!!" Should look like: "My DC-15 is finished!" ADMIN

commander nick wrote:link right here

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That doesn't look a thing like a DC-15. It is all black, it is to short, it's not a DC-15.

I knew it. A pathetic attempt at an awesome and significant weapon. It's just like I imagined when I first heard of this WIP; horribly coloured and generally pathetic.

Axel wrote:I knew it. A pathetic attempt at an awesome and significant weapon. It's just like I imagined when I first heard of this WIP; horribly coloured and generally pathetic.

Bloody hell, give the guy a break will you! This is you > :fangs:

Garet6 wrote:

Axel wrote:I knew it. A pathetic attempt at an awesome and significant weapon. It's just like I imagined when I first heard of this WIP; horribly coloured and generally pathetic.

Bloody hell, give the guy a break will you! This is you > :fangs:

But you know that all the stuff I've said is true.

Axel wrote:

Garet6 wrote:

Axel wrote:I knew it. A pathetic attempt at an awesome and significant weapon. It's just like I imagined when I first heard of this WIP; horribly coloured and generally pathetic.

Bloody hell, give the guy a break will you! This is you > :fangs:

But you know that all the stuff I've said is true.

O.k. let's work on the basic problems. The main shape 6/10. You captured the main body pretty good but not good detailing. The colorations should be all black. (and blue if you're showing a bullet coming out) Since you tried to do it with gray and black I'll give you 3/10. I agree with Aki it is also to short. 6/10 Another problem, I can just imagine my self pick it up and getting shot down by the enemy. Make it look intimidating! Overall 5/10, just work on these things and maybe this MOC can get you in the guild.

P.S. I know I'm not a mod but please review this page. https://cabg.forumotion.com/the-guild-constitution-f1/basic-netiquette-grammar-101-t632.htm

It looks like a whole bunch of long bricks put together to make a stick, and it looks a little multicolored. He needs to take his time and look at more pics and bricks before he makes his creations.

Looks like you had fun building it and it's probably very fun to play with. However, it is below average on quality of build. I assume the multi colors are because of the lack of bricks. I hope that you remake it in the future once your skills have improved.

The overall conecpt is good, but you need details and black bricks.

Axel wrote:

Garet6 wrote:

Axel wrote:I knew it. A pathetic attempt at an awesome and significant weapon. It's just like I imagined when I first heard of this WIP; horribly coloured and generally pathetic.

Bloody hell, give the guy a break will you! This is you > :fangs:

But you know that all the stuff I've said is true.

I wouldn't word it like that. There is a differance between criticism and just being nasty.

Garet6 wrote:

Axel wrote:I knew it. A pathetic attempt at an awesome and significant weapon. It's just like I imagined when I first heard of this WIP; horribly coloured and generally pathetic.

Bloody hell, give the guy a break will you! This is you > :fangs:

Yeah, don't be so harsh. It was a first attempt and though kinda blocky and multi-colored you could tell him what he needs to improve upon. I think that it needs to be more rounded off and less blocky, and obviously black, but it's a first attempt. As Rook said, when your skills improve more you can make this much better. Looks big though!

legorevolution wrote:

Garet6 wrote:

Axel wrote:I knew it. A pathetic attempt at an awesome and significant weapon. It's just like I imagined when I first heard of this WIP; horribly coloured and generally pathetic.

Bloody hell, give the guy a break will you! This is you > :fangs:

Yeah, don't be so harsh. It was a first attempt and though kinda blocky and multi-colored you could tell him what he needs to improve upon. I think that it needs to be more rounded off and less blocky, and obviously black, but it's a first attempt. As Rook said, when your skills improve more you can make this much better. Looks big though!

My apologies. Now that I look at my comment properly it does seem pretty unfair. Sorry, commander nick.

Honestly?

Do you really think that the elite CABG staff would overlook that you are using the same brickshelf account as matkilla? Multiple accounts, plus posting a 'Finished' item in the WIP section. This section was designed for non-guild members to post their MOC entrance progress and show it to the CABG, and for already members to post their WIP's here. Not for CABG Wannabes to post their finished MOC's.

You're banned for four days. Come back later, don't try to log into matkilla. It's gone. And one more mistake or slip up by you in terms of anything - grammar, posting in the wrong forum...and you're out. Multiple accounts is bad enough.

Whoa...looks like security got much tighter around here. Good call, CC-007. He definitely deserved to be banned, or at least suspended.

Axel wrote:Whoa...looks like security got much tighter around here. Good call, CC-007. He definitely deserved to be banned, or at least suspended.

Took the words right out of my mouth. At least we can learn from our mistakes.

For pointing that out to me I'm giving Aki a new title.

Clonecommando007 wrote:Honestly?

Do you really think that the elite CABG staff would overlook that you are using the same brickshelf account as matkilla? Multiple accounts, plus posting a 'Finished' item in the WIP section. This section was designed for non-guild members to post their MOC entrance progress and show it to the CABG, and for already members to post their WIP's here. Not for CABG Wannabes to post their finished MOC's.

You're banned for four days. Come back later, don't try to log into matkilla. It's gone. And one more mistake or slip up by you in terms of anything - grammar, posting in the wrong forum...and you're out. Multiple accounts is bad enough.

I completely agree. Even if it's the slightest grammar, spelling, or punctuation, mistake, he should be out. It doesn't matter if he's 9 this is supposed to be 13+ website so he shouldn't have any acceptions. We have told him atleast 20 times to spell good.

He's only nine. [four,five]

(Chanting) Ban! Ban! Ban! Ban! Ban!

major reviss wrote:(Chanting) Ban! Ban! Ban! Ban! Ban!

Everyone! Under your computer chairs you will find... your very own torches!!!! Ban him!

Mike888 wrote:

major reviss wrote:(Chanting) Ban! Ban! Ban! Ban! Ban!

Everyone! Under your computer chairs you will find... your very own torches!!!! Ban him!

Yes lets BAN him.

commander fox wrote:

Mike888 wrote:

major reviss wrote:(Chanting) Ban! Ban! Ban! Ban! Ban!

Everyone! Under your computer chairs you will find... your very own torches!!!! Ban him!

Yes lets BAN him.

He's already banned. Edit: Oh wow, 400 posts!

commander fox wrote:

Mike888 wrote:

major reviss wrote:(Chanting) Ban! Ban! Ban! Ban! Ban!

Everyone! Under your computer chairs you will find... your very own torches!!!! Ban him!

Yes lets BAN him.

Whoa! Fisty words coming from a new member!

Ecspecially being the fact that he's only had 4 post!

Alpha wrote:

commander fox wrote:

Mike888 wrote:

major reviss wrote:(Chanting) Ban! Ban! Ban! Ban! Ban!

Everyone! Under your computer chairs you will find... your very own torches!!!! Ban him!

Yes lets BAN him.

He's already banned. Edit: Oh wow, 400 posts!

Only for 4 days. But one more slip up in anything, grammar, spelling, punctuation for him is permanent ban. Sorry nick i have a bone to pick with you. Now was it the fibula or the femur? I'm confused now!

Mike888 wrote:

Alpha wrote:

commander fox wrote:

Mike888 wrote:

major reviss wrote:(Chanting) Ban! Ban! Ban! Ban! Ban!

Everyone! Under your computer chairs you will find... your very own torches!!!! Ban him!

Yes lets BAN him.

He's already banned. Edit: Oh wow, 400 posts!

Only for 4 days. But one more slip up in anything, grammar, spelling, punctuation for him is permanent ban. Sorry nick i have a bone to pick with you. Now was it the fibula or the femur? I'm confused now!

Its more than likely his first post from being back will get him banned.