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My first post apoc scene!

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My first post apoc scene!

Post by Darth Yoda on Thu Oct 09, 2008 3:42 am

Well I have seen a lot of creations that involve building sideways. (Studs not on top(SNOT)) I love this way of building, it lets you use those otherwise useless pieces that just take up space. This post apoc. scene depicts three apoc. survivors that are ready to demolish a incoming darth vader zombie! Razz The zombie is coming..... slowly...... to eat...... You! Hmm...

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Greebs


Incoming darth zombie pic Hola Wow!


Figs!


Be as critical as you want, for I would like to make many more MOCs in this genre! Smile
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Re: My first post apoc scene!

Post by major reviss on Thu Oct 09, 2008 3:47 am

Two things that poped out at me: 1. The road is a little too narrow and 2. The road needs some rubble or to be a little smashed up! It just looks... plain to me. Otherwise, fantastic!
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Re: My first post apoc scene!

Post by Axel on Thu Oct 09, 2008 6:11 am

The road is obviously a bit plain, but the other part is very nicely done. great greebles!
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Re: My first post apoc scene!

Post by J4ke on Thu Oct 09, 2008 2:47 pm

Hmm, not bad. The road cold use some widening in general, also roughen the surface of it. It might be a good idea to make the yellow line thinner too, just one plate thickness should be fine.

Also, while your greebling is good, what is its purpose? It just looks like you had a checklist, and the next item was greebles, so you popped it in the middle of the floor. The idea of greebling is to add detail to a pre-existing structure, but you've kind of placed them on an area of floor...

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Re: My first post apoc scene!

Post by -Aki- on Thu Oct 09, 2008 4:40 pm

Nice! I like the greebs!

But . you! You stole my road! I demand 1000 right now Razz!
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Re: My first post apoc scene!

Post by flare on Thu Oct 09, 2008 5:49 pm

Aki-kundu wrote:Nice! I like the greebs!

But . you! You stole my road! I demand 1000 right now Razz!

Actually other people have used this techinque? so he owes squat aki Razz.
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Re: My first post apoc scene!

Post by Clonecommando007 on Thu Oct 09, 2008 10:50 pm

great work for a first time! I have yet to try post apoc, but I doubt my work will be as good as this. I love the snot road (though the yellow line is pretty wide) and the little camp in the old building is sweet!

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Re: My first post apoc scene!

Post by Jedi Joe on Thu Oct 09, 2008 11:53 pm

Looks a little clean for post-apoc, but I love the technique you used for the road! Bravo!
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