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AT-LS
Hey guys this is my first topic. Well I made a AT-LS out of the parts of Anakin's Jedi Star Fighter (2008 one) and it looks pretty good. If you have any suggestions or comments about it please tell me!
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Commander Four- Non-Guild Member
- Age : 26
Location : Stalker...
Re: AT-LS
This really isn't an AT-RT, it's too squat and bulky. If you're using the Delta 7B, take the wedges and enclosed cockpit and build a heavier walker. The thing you've built isn't great, but it's a starting point at least...
Please resize and crop your pictures too.
Please resize and crop your pictures too.
Re: AT-LS
Read: http://www.thecabg.net/decals-and-techniques-f10/lego-art-design-principles-101-t207.htm Look closely at page 8 regarding photography.
Re: AT-LS
Sorry it's the way Clonecommando007 taught me how to use images. I just made a walker because I only have the official AT-AP set and that's all. I think I'm gonna rename the AT-RT from AT-RT to AT-LS (All Terrain Light Scout) I'm don't know how to resize and crop it because I got the picture from brickshelf.
I used my White Chocolate camera (I don't have a real camera) and I know about that stuff because we are learning it in art. I don't really have any pieces that will go with it and be the same color. That's why my stuff stinks.
Read this before posting again. https://cabg.forumotion.com/the-guild-constitution-f1/the-constitution-t1.htm#1 Pay close attention to netiquette. (Double Posts) ADMIN
I used my White Chocolate camera (I don't have a real camera) and I know about that stuff because we are learning it in art. I don't really have any pieces that will go with it and be the same color. That's why my stuff stinks.
Read this before posting again. https://cabg.forumotion.com/the-guild-constitution-f1/the-constitution-t1.htm#1 Pay close attention to netiquette. (Double Posts) ADMIN
Commander Four- Non-Guild Member
- Age : 26
Location : Stalker...
Re: AT-LS
I used my White Chocolate camera (I don't have a real camera) and I know about that stuff because we are learning it in art. I don't really have any pieces that will go with it and be the same color. That's why my stuff stinks.
Read this before posting again. https://cabg.forumotion.com/the-guild-constitution-f1/the-constitution-t1.htm#1 Pay close attention to netiquette. (Double Posts) ADMIN
Read this before posting again. https://cabg.forumotion.com/the-guild-constitution-f1/the-constitution-t1.htm#1 Pay close attention to netiquette. (Double Posts) ADMIN
Commander Four- Non-Guild Member
- Age : 26
Location : Stalker...
Re: AT-LS
Yea, read the Constitution and other stuff before you post again...
DarthPineapple- VIP Former Staff
- Age : 29
Location : The Netherlands
Re: AT-LS
OK, I'd suggest adding some more pieces out of your own collection. That's the key to a good MOC.
First off, I'd make the pod(where the clone sits) not as wide. I'd make the legs a little longer, and the place where they are attached to the pod a little more sturdy. Also, if you are going to use pieces from your collection I suggest trying to stick to one color scheme. That is, don't put blue on the left, black on the right, grey on top, white on the bottom, etc.
First off, I'd make the pod(where the clone sits) not as wide. I'd make the legs a little longer, and the place where they are attached to the pod a little more sturdy. Also, if you are going to use pieces from your collection I suggest trying to stick to one color scheme. That is, don't put blue on the left, black on the right, grey on top, white on the bottom, etc.
80-0- Non-Guild Member
- Age : 29
Location : New York, New YORK!
Re: AT-LS
Yeah I have a problem I don't have a lot of leg parts. I'm renaming this a AT-LS. Thanks for all the suggestions!
Commander Four- Non-Guild Member
- Age : 26
Location : Stalker...
Re: AT-LS
It's better than that one speeder you made for your application, but still needs a lot of work...
Keep trying!
Keep trying!
Jedi Joe- Guild Member
- Location : Florida, the state of neverending heat and humidity...
Re: AT-LS
A must-have is also some blasters. Don't make them too big, though.
Remember: A small transport is a light transport is a fast transport!
Remember: A small transport is a light transport is a fast transport!
80-0- Non-Guild Member
- Age : 29
Location : New York, New YORK!
Re: AT-LS
Thanks. Actually I'm working on that speeder right now. I'm working on the walls of it. I have a better speeder bike that's ok. You judge once I post it!
Commander Four- Non-Guild Member
- Age : 26
Location : Stalker...
Re: AT-LS
Commander Four wrote:Thanks. Actually I'm working on that speeder right now. I'm working on the walls of it. I have a better speeder bike that's ok. You judge once I post it!
OK!
A speeder bike, you say? Is it based on a TLC speeder bike, or is it a swoop of sorts or a totally custom speeder bike?
80-0- Non-Guild Member
- Age : 29
Location : New York, New YORK!
Re: AT-LS
That doesn't look like a AT RT at all. It's legs are puny, and it has no guns.
-Aki-- Non-Guild Member
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Commander Four- Non-Guild Member
- Age : 26
Location : Stalker...
Re: AT-LS
It's based on a BARC speeder and Count Dooku's speeder bikeCommandoEighty-Oh wrote:Commander Four wrote:Thanks. Actually I'm working on that speeder right now. I'm working on the walls of it. I have a better speeder bike that's ok. You judge once I post it!
OK!
A speeder bike, you say? Is it based on a TLC speeder bike, or is it a swoop of sorts or a totally custom speeder bike?
Commander Four- Non-Guild Member
- Age : 26
Location : Stalker...
Re: AT-LS
Can you stop. I seriously forgot!But check out my speeder and flamethrower guy.
Commander Four- Non-Guild Member
- Age : 26
Location : Stalker...
Re: AT-LS
Commander Four wrote:Can you stop. I seriously forgot!But check out my speeder and flamethrower guy.
The speeder looks ugly, but the flame thrower is nice .
-Aki-- Non-Guild Member
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Re: AT-LS
Thanks. The speeder I might add some more stuff to it. I'll see what everyone thinks about it.
Commander Four- Non-Guild Member
- Age : 26
Location : Stalker...
Re: AT-LS
Aki-kundu wrote:Commander Four wrote:sorry.
And the 5 word limit! Bloody hell !
Sheesh! You don't have to jump all over him like a nexu at a shaak!
C4, just do your best to follow the rules.
80-0- Non-Guild Member
- Age : 29
Location : New York, New YORK!
Re: AT-LS
You're well on your way to banndom with all of those rule violations. We hate those here at the CABG.
Also a general rule: Don't give your own MOC an opinion, unless it's negative. Don't build yourself up, take yourself down and let others build you back up. If they don't build you back up, then you need to improve on your MOCing skills.and it looks pretty good
Clonecommando007- Kinda like a UFO
- Location : Ohio
Re: AT-LS
Sorry about that. I'm really sorry about everything I've done.
Commander Four- Non-Guild Member
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Location : Stalker...
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