Battlefield: Comic #1. 'Captured'

I decided to expand my 'Battlefield' series of bignettes to comics. Some of you guys might remember my other bignettes, but if you don't, there they are.

So, may I present,

Battlefield: Comic #1. 'Captured'

Starring:

Clonecommando007

DarthPineapple

Lieutenant Antillies

Before I show this, I want to tell you who to look for.
This is Clonecommando007, reffered to in the story as Scot:

This is DarthPineapple, reffered to in the story as Pineapple:

And this is lieutenant antillies, reffered to in the story as Antillies:


Now, presenting, 'Captured'!!

































































































So there it is! Comments? Critisism? Suggestions for next time?

Also, I don't want any more good guy sig figs, but if any of you genuinely believe that you are well known around this community, please send me a picture of your sig fig. He might become a bad guy!

It's great! I like the whole story, although it's a bit hard to understand the whole thing when I come in. Anyway, I can't wait to see your next one!

You are some kind of bounty hunter. Antillies and I are on your patio because you are away. Then when the army finds us, you come home and try to kill me because I'm always on your patio.

Alright... That clears it all up.

Wow that was long. Make them shorter, so that people don't lose interest, or label it as a comic book/story not a comic strip.

Ha ooh a tanning girl hilarious! I might become a bad guy I've got all the pieces for a bad gu excep legs an torso.

Rook wrote: Wow that was long. Make them shorter, so that people don't lose interest, or label it as a comic book/story not a comic strip.

Thanks Rook. Maybe I will do that next time.

Well it was short for me because the last 20 or so pics. wouldn't come up, (the last picture was where Antilles says "concert, your a terrible liar.") but from what I saw it was good. By the way, where did you get the torsos for the cops?

The torsos came from the old 'world city' police officers.

And the brickshelf gallery is here: http://www.brickshelf.com/cgi-bin/gallery.cgi?f=302088

I personelly really liked it!

I liked this comic, some nice humor although it did get a bit long.

Foxy

I think I should be in the next one.

AWSOME
Lol at the tanning girls

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Holy Ship! Don't bump topics so old the post was almost last year! PS: Read the rules before post again.

Wow!!!!!!!!!

Like it!!

Clearly can't read the previous post or any PM's. See ya. --R