Kanye, and ozara's starfighter
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Kanye, and ozara's starfighter
As I was thinking about my new legion I thought that my two jedi who will be revealed tomorrow should have a special starfighter for themselves. This speedster can fit both jedi, and lots of cargo. Although it is a bit bigger than most jedi starfighters it makes up for its size with heavy firepower, speed, and the most powerful weapon: These two jedi's minds.
Here it is:
The cockpit
The cargo hold with the top off...
Tell me what you think!
Here it is:
The cockpit
The cargo hold with the top off...
Tell me what you think!
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I like it a lot, the shape is really cool and it's got kind of a CIS color scheme. The only thing I would work on would be the nose, it's kind of too blocky but just a more rounded shape would make it great.
fjords94- Non-Guild Member
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Location : It rains so much it might as well be Jabiim!
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Holy Batman Greebles!
Very good shape, slightly blocky, and I'm finding that ETA canopy to be a bit cliche now. Like Fjord said, make it more Republicy in color !
Very good shape, slightly blocky, and I'm finding that ETA canopy to be a bit cliche now. Like Fjord said, make it more Republicy in color !
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Not bad at all, I really like the wings. However, that nose needs to be killed. With fire. It's too bulky, so replace it with curved wedges, for example 6x2 curves. The rear is detailed, but rather bulky too. However, the functionality of this makes up for it.
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The cargo hold is nice, but... do... not... use... both... greys! It's really awkward.
DarthPineapple- VIP Former Staff
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Location : The Netherlands
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Very well done, looks like you have a good insight into bricks, although the basic outline is a little odd.
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As some have said already, get rid of the Eta-2 canopy. I know since there are two pilots it might be a bit hard to change that, but that's the only bad thing about it! great job again!
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I like the Eta 2 canopy actually. It adds a nice flow to it! Good work on the ship, I can't wait to see a V2!
Jedi Joe- Guild Member
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Like the Greebles and the snot'd wing, as well as all the storage inside. Don't really like the nose.
And it does look CISy. Good work though!
And it does look CISy. Good work though!
Clonecommando007- Kinda like a UFO
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Nice , exept i don't like the idea of a single cockpit for 2 people. -And the cargo hold is a little......stuffed don't you think?
noobswatter- Non-Guild Member
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Location : Canada
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The storage bins are a very good idea. I never expected it as I scrolled down. You did a good job with the angles of the ship and blending things together. My only complaints are that you need that stripe to come down the front of the nose (or at lease a little more cis blue there) and perhaps a stripe or something blue on the wings? Landing gear?
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legorevolution wrote:The storage bins are a very good idea. I never expected it as I scrolled down. You did a good job with the angles of the ship and blending things together. My only complaints are that you need that stripe to come down the front of the nose (or at lease a little more cis blue there) and perhaps a stripe or something blue on the wings? Landing gear?
Thanks, oh, and a V2 shall come to you guys shortly...
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darth yoda wrote:legorevolution wrote:The storage bins are a very good idea. I never expected it as I scrolled down. You did a good job with the angles of the ship and blending things together. My only complaints are that you need that stripe to come down the front of the nose (or at lease a little more cis blue there) and perhaps a stripe or something blue on the wings? Landing gear?
Thanks, oh, and a V2 shall come to you guys shortly...
Yee! I'll be quietly stalking the cabg forums until you post...
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Looks good DY! The SNOT looks awesome!!
And the nose does need improvement... but I happen to like the Eta-2 cockpit...
And the nose does need improvement... but I happen to like the Eta-2 cockpit...
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Dy, I see you put a lot of time in to this; and it looks great! Nice gleebles, too.
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